Check'em

so you got me.damn i thought you got ghost.We'll have to battle now.Not now but in the near future. i don't want you thinking i'm soft and right like that all the time.




iMAGINE THAT FIRST BATTLE AGAINST A GIRL AND I LOSE.YOU GET PROPS MA.

Your Alias Could Be Reynolds .. And You Still Ain`t Rippin Raps..
This Herb Bag's Verbs Is Stacked .. Then You Fall Into Distant Traps..
Only Lines This Foney Bags Cat Is Rippin Are Dicks In Cracks..
Ya Jabs Flipped Since You Ain't Hittin Like Throwin Fist In Gaps..
Feelin Sick To Ya Stomach Like Bodies On Starving Ethiopian Kids ..
Assistin Bags To His Own Death Similar To What Dr. Kavorkian Did..
Shit I'll Finish Money Right Now, Leave Him'In Zipped Bag's
Prick Bags Not Phasin Me .. Always Throwin Bitch Jabs
Why'd I Even Walk In This Forum? I Knew It Was Finished
This Kid's Scurred .. Constantly Postin At The Last Minute
What?? You Thought You Could Feed Off This Week's Flow?
Cause Practically I Already Ate Your Attempts Of Weak Blows
Speak Tho, Oh .. I Forgot U Was On Mute, Ya Non-Existant
Ya Name's Osteoperosis, Repitiwa Gave Me Weak Competition


Sorry For The Edit, Spelled Practically Wrong

Her whole style is full with buffoonery/
To her, my verse is gonna be a golden jubilee/
Your whole style is fake you ain’t foolin’ me/
Your punches ain’t touchin’ me cause your bars are like a doodle B/
Plus your flow is rusty like a fake jewelry/
I let you go first since I’m a gentlemen/
But I ain’t soft since I’m rippin’ up your sentiment/
You takin’ a Loss is this battle’s settlement/
The only time she causes mayhem is below the belt/
Read my rhymes quick cause the bars ‘ell melt/
I don’t play with the cards that are delt/
Cause I keep ace’s “up my sleeve”, like a player who likes to cheat/
Feel the heat when I grip at ease, spit at your knees have you fallin’ like the 2 WTC's/
Another way you cause mayhem is threw swallowing babies/
Takin’ lives of the unborn is cruel to human nature/
Your rhymes ruin’ computer monitors and the bars that touch a piece of paper/
Hate on me then I serve you shit bad for your stomach like a fucked up waiter/
Or I can make your face a mess like a fucked up razor/

those were f's hard hitting lines, i liked this battle not alot to read, but f came stronger in my opinion, and the girl was aiight, both of y'all was good


vote= f

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F just won this cause he used better METAs and wordplay in his punches... Mayhem, had a tight verse... and I think she's pretty good but just wasnt as good as F's

Now that I know text battles are all about punches, which I learned do to the overwhelming sentiment against me on my battle against Unique... I'd have to say that this battle was pretty bland. Everything was there, but there wasn't anythign that jumped out, F's wordplay and metas were a little better though, so I'm giving him my vote.

Thanx yall, 3-0 ME uppin'

Her whole style is full with buffoonery/
To her, my verse is gonna be a golden jubilee/
Your whole style is fake you ain’t foolin’ me/
Your punches ain’t touchin’ me cause your bars are like a doodle B/
Plus your flow is rusty like a fake jewelry/
I let you go first since I’m a gentlemen/
But I ain’t soft since I’m rippin’ up your sentiment/
You takin’ a Loss is this battle’s settlement/
The only time she causes mayhem is below the belt/
Read my rhymes quick cause the bars ‘ell melt/
I don’t play with the cards that are delt/



those lines hit hard i liked dem dats what won it for F-Money


vote=F-Money

^^^thanx LW, 4-0 me uppin'

vote lady

felt her verse alot more..i thought had more better punches..

4-1 me uppin'...

i don't know how u kidz are voting
but money bags verse waz 2 simple
he just used wordz cuz they rhyme
her style waz more complex, she
had way more multis, better word-
play and her punches hit way harder
den f-money bags, diz chic iz killin
catz and newbie votes like the 1'z
yall givin are ridiculous, my 2 centz


my vote: lady mayheim




-icediggety

uppin for votes