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Old 07-01-02, 01:19 PM   #1
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Chronophobia

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Stricken by the hands of time
Now romance has run out of rhyme
Mother earth help stop the bleeding
What’s been committed? What is the crime?

Fearing Helios and his sun dogs
Critiquing my looks and monologues
Someday I won't run away
From time's mystery and destiny fog

Green with envy of a perfect Earth
Blue again with profligacy’s mirth
Purple passion for the one that I love
Red with anger at father time up above

The wind tonight speaks softly to me
Quaintly stalling my heartfelt misery
Though the future, I know, I can not see
'Cause fearing time makes my eyes bleed

Sundance, longing for a romance
Wishing my past would leave me alone
So my friends will give me one more chance
To make amends with a legend, Capone

Listen to my song of cold fear
Time is chasing me all over here
Boredom, birth, death, and life
Time now threatens sagacity sheer


This poem took me a very long time to write, and I put a lot of thought into it. Thank you for reading, and please reply.
-Kat
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Old 07-01-02, 02:30 PM   #2
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awesome peice.... it was beautifully written... the words and the flow were down right amazing and teh vocab was awesome too (but i had to look up a few words... im not that smart)... keep it flowin!
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Old 07-01-02, 11:30 PM   #3
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C'mon...

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Please don't sleep on this...
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Old 07-02-02, 03:22 PM   #4
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come on people....this is a masterpiece of the poetic scriptures....'wake up'...(!!)...
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Old 07-03-02, 02:05 AM   #5
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Crying...

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((crys)) Thank you for your support Varentao...
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Old 07-04-02, 02:38 AM   #6
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great piece of work here, i would of replyed sooner but i had to spit out a verse back at MRB and DirtBoy so i was busy. Great great work here tho, i give u props for it. Great beautifully done.
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Old 04-29-03, 02:17 AM   #7
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Amazing. What else can I say? Super nifty.

(Did I just say 'Super nifty'?)

Still... undiscribably amazing.

~Shalom~
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