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08-17-04, 11:18 PM
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*American Idol*
IP: 3240 794D
Playstation generation
Grand theft auto frustration Attention defecit escalation Spreading across the nation Mother's planting carnations Father's giving into temptations Daughter's seeking a higher education While son's indulging in masturbation Pop songs being vomited out of radio stations Reality shows giving television constipation Stereotypical, yet true, examples of media defecation Historical fabrication Religious correlation Work ethic termination Political sublaxation Kids singing "we are, we are, the youth of the Nation" Watching SpongeBoB Squarepants instead of doing algebraic equations Disney World vacations Corporational monopolozation Sexual taxations Priests worshipping through penetration Spiritual animation Gospel singing mixed with girations A nation on the verge of extermination. ((werd so fucking true)) |
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08-18-04, 01:45 AM
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Jumpin' Along
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IP: 28AD 5545
lol.. it was an okay poem but didnt really get the consept becuase it was entitled american idol... but anways it was an okay.. drop thje flow.. was shacky and it was alittle off at times.. but other then that it was okay..
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09-05-04, 04:26 PM
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nice work bro, keep it up!
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09-05-04, 05:09 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
awesome piece, i liked it a lot, was more like an open mic though, but very good and true, to say the least............keep it up.1
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