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Old 08-19-04, 02:14 AM   #1
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Just Spittin....

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Erasin the pain.. of dunnz gettin blazed on pavementz/
pacin the room...Im tryna break this rap enslavement//
Rememberin tombs.. of ni99az who been slain in vanity/
murdered for nothin...and taken from their precious families//
Ive lost ma-sanity... I-swear-to-GOD I dream of faces/
buried in torment..and far-away from Holy places//
Ma stomach is sick...sometimes dunn, I cough-up & spit/
the blood of ma peoplez.. who fell to the Bottomless Pit//
This sh*t aint a game, I tell U cuz Ive been in the same/
perilous roads.. that lead us.. to perilous pain..//
If-it-wasnt-for-Christ.. Id be just a spit in the rain/
but-I-write-this-here...so somebody could figure the game.........///
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Old 08-19-04, 05:58 AM   #2
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ma that was tight but yer flow was fucked cuz of yer insane long rhymes 6/10
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Old 08-19-04, 06:00 AM   #3
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u fag his flow was fine ur flow sucks, thats was illmatic, alota emotion and nice wordplay, unique structure`, good drop
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Old 08-20-04, 03:04 AM   #4
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I appreciate the criticz.... ma badd on the verse length...it was my first post... I thought it hadda be at least 6 lines... nahmean.. Anywayz..thanx dunn.. One
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