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Check in by: 08-23-04 at 09:22 AM

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SandNigga has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 09:22 AM.

dont know who the fuck you are


i aint challenged you
you aint challenged me

SO HWAT THE FUCK YOU THINKIN BOY

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Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 09:30 AM.

the only ice u got is in ur name
u on this site for computer fame

i stay lasted and heated
go into combat and never get retreted

im wronger then the war in iraq
cuz i stay knocking white boys the fuk back

ill come up to u for no reason
next ull find urself on the ground bleedin

ill beat on u for a minute
unload on ur ass like when pop eye eats his spiniga

cuz im crazyer then that nigga hanibul
to me ur bodies is eadabal

no disrespect ONLY if u want it in theat way. i was jus bored and i wanted to FREESTYLE

yo i bless ya chin cause i heard SAND messes wit no one less then men...
battling my punches is like fighting george bush anything i Press-I-Dent (president)...
SAND came wit Parker Brother Intentions but i get Board-wit-Games (board games)...
Nato should send backup incase i treat SAND like folded 100$ bills and Bend-Ya-Man(benjamins)
homos like SAND go to church to Test a Men*testiment* cause thinking u Hot is tha Sin-of-Men(cinnamon)

Im the Higher, on Food Chains, w/ Cuts so Fresh I leave Blue Stains.....(heard blood is blue before exposed to O2..)
How could ya not be Feelin My Style, still in denile, with Bruised Veins...
You set the thread, no call outs like you have no FEAR .....
You couldnt A- Dress this Beef if I gave ya Food to Wear...
This Newbies Scared, Im Godliness, Hard Punches like ROCKy's Uppercut
Ya Tried tio act tough by settin a thread b4 checkin anyhting on the ICE PICK you stupid fuck

You still didn't know the Con Sequence read below SON

I'll knock your teeth down your throat so you can cough up blood when you laugh
you hand me a weak verse and I hand you your ass
Give you repeated shots to the body worst than the matrix when I read your shit it makes me wanna log out and forsake ya text
you tried to sink ya teeth in ma lyrics..But I Cracked-ya-Wisdom...
no wonder you couldn't get a battle..everyone knew you was Wack-and-This-Dumb...



damn i had to murder this cat

He didnt call me out or answer a call out of mine in bitch slapped, HE JUST SET THE THREAD AND DROPPID HIS VERSE

SO NATURALLY I ACCPETED AND IM HERE TO PUNISH HIS ASS

callin me out and not knowin who the FUCK I AM

YOUI GOIN DOWN THERE SAND

You Got Murdered


And I Didnt Even Drop My Best

U Shouldnt Ever Test The Waters When There Is A Shark Like Me Swimmin In Em

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Voted For: Ice Pick

Opener - Ice, weak but better than Sands
Closer - Ice, again, same thing
Punches - Ice, came harder than Sand
Personals - Neither, both were weak
Multies - Neither, didnt see good ones
Metas - Ice, his whole verse was basically metas, haha
Vocab - Ice, Sands was elementary
Structure - Sand, Ice's was wack

Overall Ice had the better verse althought I didnt really like how your structure or punches were set up. Use less metas and hit with harder punches. And as for Sand, I dont think freestyles are gunna get you wins man, gotta actually throw a pucnh in the dawg, nice try tho, no hate...

Please return the favor with an honest vote/feed...

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...96&page=2&pp=15

I did it for you...

structure looks ok on my computer


THEN AGAIN I HAVE A 23 inch screen

but again i didnt even try for this battle, didnt know who or why the fuck this cat was askin for a battle

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aiight kool, plz hit up the link I left...........

nah man that was my cuzin, not me homie i didnt even want to battle u. a if u want challenge me and i bet i light ur ass. i dont kno how to challenge so u got to do it...

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NICE COVER UP THERE SON

but i aint buyin it for a second

you suck and to think you would beat me

YEAH FUCKIN RIGHT

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wat eva dawg. u bet a 12 year ol kid man. and ur metaphors were koo they werent on my level
and the way u cunsturucted ur flow was like a fukin pre skol kid
i dont care i aint provin nothin if u dont want to loose to me jus tell me man

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