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08-21-04, 06:20 AM | #1 | |||||||
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Could Have Been
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She was alone on the floor
Just crying in tears She didn't know what had happened What brought about her worst fears It was over before it started He had caught her cheating She had no idea what was to come Of the emotional beating He was heart broken She had betrayed him so He thought they were happy But that was so very long ago She couldn't live with herself She was so very ashamed She knew he had the right For she was the one he blamed They were together for so long But right infront of her was the end She couldn't lie to him anymore She just couldn't pretend The truth was out The relationship was over It destroyed his life and her's You rarely found her sober She couldn't take the nasty rumors Got tired of all the lies Tried so many unsuccessful times Tried so very hard to die Finally when the day came about She ended her life full of pain She had made the biggest mistake For his love for her still did remain He had the heart to forgive her But she never gave him a chance She felt she didn't deserve it Because of her unfaithful romance She thought of herself as a horrible person But it went just a little too far After it ended it was like he wasn't alive She was his shooting star Well it was over then Since she ended her painful life He couldn't live with himself So he picked up the knife.......... |
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08-21-04, 06:28 AM | #2 | ||||
E-Style, Bitch.
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You Got Some DEEP DEEP DEEP Poetry Goin On Girl, Its Niiiice...Keep Up The Good Work Babygirl...!!1!!
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08-21-04, 06:43 AM | #3 | |||||||
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hey thanx a bunch! uhh do u hav AIM or YAHOO? sHoTTaBoY!
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08-21-04, 07:20 AM | #4 | ||||
E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 3507 1659
Naaaaw, I Only Gotts MSN, But I Think You Should Download MSN
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08-21-04, 07:25 AM | #5 | |||||||
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Deep poetry B. Bitch. Deep as hell, I thought vocab could be upped a bit... but good work there...
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08-21-04, 07:37 AM | #6 | |||||||
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thanx err body and i'll look inta downloadin dat msn shyt iight! peAce
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08-21-04, 05:30 PM | #7 | |||||||
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good drop...u really do talk for ur heart
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So what chicks can rap too/ you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/ Respect List: AKA (down, and keepin it real) KoObOo (A true friend wouldn't be the right words) The Disciple (mmmm Tight probbly wouldn't be the word) lol Tony Montana (thiz my main boi for rapping) Ciara Myst (hey if u cant beat em', join em') phatom (he jus got skill) LivenLegend ( thiz my friend for life) fluidmoon (she got ova half ya'll beat) |
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