just another grave along this cemetary path, a girl to be exact
a path that leads to my heart, constantly getting stabbed in the back
confused again, offering all my trust, for not love but lust
watching my sympathetic dreams, and hope get blow up in dust
another part of my life...wasted...just memories to rot till decay
something to regret, that i'll want to forget every single day
i despise the tears that flow from my eyes, regreting all my wasted tries
looking up to the clouds in the sky, preparing myself for yet another lie
theres just nothing left for me to grasp, just something i can't put in the past
so i enter the tub, but not for a bath, i hit the tap, and take my last gasp
...i loved you....

meh

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deep... i been down that road a few times... chicks can be dirty sometimes... i realized that i was the best thing that any of them ever had and they just didn't know how to respond to someone who actually treated them like women. yeah, but before i found that out iwas just feeling it, nahmean?... like in ya drop... not wanting to go on and shyt... i finally woke up and was like man fuck that broad... i can do better than that anyway! i usually did... good shyt keep droppin'em

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up up up up up up up and away

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Good wording, and structure deep shit, kinda interesting...pure poetry cuz.

pretty nice man, i liked how it flowed and it was deep

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ay nice drop...had some nice flow...and structure...good vocab...peace 1...return da favor

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