Tha Birth Of Human, Tha Position Of One Single Movement..
Like We're Created By Machinery And Were Now All Queuing..
For Tha Outcome Of Whats Going To Happen When Were Living..
A Breath Of Fresh Air As We Control What Is Really Vivid..
Within Our Job Specification Which Is Also Known As Life..
Androids Invented To Be Tha Globes Field Animation Device..
Everyone Has Their Own Definite Errand's To Be Performed..
Careers Have Already Been Chosen, No-one Can Be Reforemed..
Mechanical Minds With Working Gears And Gyrating Cogs..
Premonition Perception Always Fictacious Like Beneath Fog..
Thoughts Are Sole, Experience Equals Hours After Arrival..
Denial Is Only Ever Designed If We As People Decide To..
Tha Path Is Towards Objectives, Tha One That We All Walk..
Stroll, Strut, Hike Or Trudge Untill Tha Imminent Fork..
Multiply Possibilites Then Exist, But Nobody Even Cares..
Tha One Transaction That Takes Place Is What We All Share..
Conceptions As A Unique, And Alike In Every Possible Way..
A Long Road To Glory, But My Car Breaks Down Every Day..
Seems Like Were Monitored Every Second By A So Called Fate..
We Are All On Tha Thin Ice, As Tha Whole Universe Skates..
All Abstractions Create Are Obstacles For Us To Fall Over..
Everyone Hurdles In Their Own Mood, Some Ill, Some Sober..
Nocturnal Pursuit During Tha Light Hours Must Be Blasphemy..
Sleep, Eat And Talk But Only If Theres Anything Left In Me..
Resemblances Described As Though Seen In A Previous Time..
But Us Robots See DeJaVu While Waiting In Vertical Lines..
As We're Back Receiving Our Destiny From Tha Higher Power..
Goals Are Left In Tha Doorway For At Least Another Hour..
We Tha Mortal Emcees, We're Molded In Tha Augmented Manner..
Riding For Tha Identical Ambitions In A Symbolical Wagon..
Tha Process Of Spanners And Hammers, All Just Metaphorical..
But Tha Technique Is Tha Means Of Tha Genesis Anatomical..
We Are All Governed By Tha Pieties, We All Step Like Clones..
Accomplish Nothing, We Can Perish And Be Reborn, Tha Drones..

Always something different and unique that comes from you,I don't know why your stuff is slept on so much,it is good.The way you write it out,it has good imagery,it is on topic,and goes in depth,complex vocab like usual,overall a good piece like always.

that shit was hott u got skill fasho, had nice rhyme wordplay and all, no one should sleep on this really

holla

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this was... good i guess, i hope cuz i read it and thought of it as a... piece that deserves respect so... respect to you dawg, peace 'n' keep spitting


signed,
~madd

Thanks For Tha Feedback..

This was iLL, contained everything, depth, skill, wordplay, rhythm and a thinking concept... Liked all of this, the rhythmw as strong, multies and internal rhymes well rounded and used to show ya style, strong rhyme scheme... The wordplay and deep metaphors was something that caught my eye, also the vocab was well used, imagery helped with the right vocab, detailed and scripted words, a flawless piece, and your in PURE, wouldnt suprise me sun.. If ya wanna collab or something, holla at me... AIM - emceerhetorix, email - smooth_mc@hotmail.com... Get at me, and keep dropping the gems...

Peez...

yo like everyone said this was nice ur vocab was tight as usual but ur flow sumtimes was a bit off but i guess this is a text and not audio. obviously got a big imagination tho lol. anyway check mine returning to my home aight peace

sounded more like a poem then a rap. But that aint a bad thing. It flowed nicely, it spoke true deal. and u jest made it urs. Total respect on da peice.

it was definitely different.. i dunno if i liked it or not..

i seen ur other shit before.. u aiight...
no hatin..

-peace

Thanx Bro, u just typed my reply...And tha ~*~Pure~*~ bit made me smile so i thought i'd quote that too...

Indeed This was an iLL drop...Yet i expect nothing less man from you..

Keep up tha good work & representing tha iLLest Net-Crew..!!

Peace n god bless bro..

Thanks For All Tha Feedback On This Shiat..

Yea Im Down For A Collab RhetoriX..

I'll Hit You Up On AIM Sometime..