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07-05-02, 03:43 AM
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jus warming up
IP: 95FF 1D86
grab hold of any emcee jaw and
leave them totally toothless none of you rap niggaz cant fuck with me im a 100% fucking ruthless trust me you niggaz are fuckin useless hate niggaz that like to talk about how they hustlin how they makin money in the streets and the bitches they jugglin i kill niggaz like these for a livin cause they beggin to me its all about the money takin trips to jamaica where its sunny |
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07-05-02, 03:49 AM
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IP: 65A8 3F0D
TO SHORT LEFT ME AT THE CCLIMAX IT WAS TIGHT
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07-05-02, 12:18 PM
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IP: D069 6C00
Seemed like a simple drop, didnt really have anything for me... The rhyme scheme was simplistic, more multies needed and structure your flow... Liked the vocab it was working throughout, more wordplay and punches needed, some metaphors woulda changed the perspective... It was working in some places, aint bad for a quicc free... I think you gotta push ypur wordplay a lot if your gonna drop pieces like this... Keep spitting and elevating...
Peez... |
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