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Spen and Master Blaster Squad up
IP: 4577 CD9A
Master->
I'm not from Tennessee Don't even drink Hennesy But I do have a tendency To bean niggas like Boston Two middle fingers like Austin When I whip out my dick and give a bitch a stunner To her chin Nigga please I know more kung-fu then Jin Now who's Ruff Rydin' On my skateboard with Pharrell Grindin' Nigga talk shit Like an A-Cup you gonea be flat linin' My mentality causes fatalities Cause I stay pervertedly endlessly foreverly Spen Me, just chillin politicin' on monogamy doin alleys in a shopping cart cutting down hoes to just body parts sparks kick from the back cuz i'm just Grindin' 3 kick flips and 5 on a sack crackle pop bending corners slangin rocks and lines for yo snot box hittin barrell rolls lookin for O High hoes that can walk it like a dog and drop it like a pro Birds? Don't fly south! come with me just coop out fuckin and pluckin feathers till you pooped out after i'm done flock together and get the fuck out OHIO Niggaz |
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elementary...
IP: 9145 D086
the flow, vocab., line scheme, etc. were all elementary. y'all gotta check out a dictionary, and use more vocab. you might be newbies, but you can do better than this...
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lol
IP: 1A6C 6FFE
ok ok this shit was mad basic, both verses were short, nothing just caught my eye, both verses really had no good points, no word play or nothin this could be tweaked and made better
not wack just need work, oh yeah, don't just drop shit and expect peepo to relpy u gota peep other peepo shit 2 holla muthafuckaz 1
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.Tha Open Mic King.
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So SO Basic...
Multi's were missing...Vocab was non-existant... Nothing caught my eye at all.. Try expanding your knowledge & increasing your metaphor's... Keep postin.. **waits for elevation** Peace n god bless |
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