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Old 07-05-02, 03:04 PM   #1
Spen
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Spen and Master Blaster Squad up

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Master->
I'm not from Tennessee
Don't even drink Hennesy
But I do have a tendency
To bean niggas like Boston
Two middle fingers like Austin
When I whip out my dick and give a bitch a stunner
To her chin
Nigga please
I know more kung-fu then Jin
Now who's Ruff Rydin'
On my skateboard with Pharrell Grindin'
Nigga talk shit
Like an A-Cup you gonea be flat linin'
My mentality causes fatalities
Cause I stay pervertedly endlessly foreverly

Spen
Me, just chillin politicin' on monogamy
doin alleys in a shopping cart
cutting down hoes to just body parts
sparks kick from the back
cuz i'm just Grindin' 3 kick flips and 5 on a sack
crackle pop bending corners slangin rocks
and lines for yo snot box
hittin barrell rolls
lookin for O High hoes
that can walk it like a dog
and drop it like a pro
Birds? Don't fly south!
come with me just coop out
fuckin and pluckin feathers till you pooped out
after i'm done flock together and get the fuck out



OHIO Niggaz
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Old 07-05-02, 03:16 PM   #2
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elementary...

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the flow, vocab., line scheme, etc. were all elementary. y'all gotta check out a dictionary, and use more vocab. you might be newbies, but you can do better than this...
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Old 07-05-02, 03:18 PM   #3
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lol

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ok ok this shit was mad basic, both verses were short, nothing just caught my eye, both verses really had no good points, no word play or nothin this could be tweaked and made better

not wack just need work,
oh yeah, don't just drop shit and expect peepo to relpy
u gota peep other peepo shit 2

holla muthafuckaz

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Old 07-06-02, 06:04 AM   #4
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Lightbulb

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So SO Basic...

Multi's were missing...Vocab was non-existant...

Nothing caught my eye at all..

Try expanding your knowledge & increasing your metaphor's...

Keep postin..

**waits for elevation**

Peace n god bless
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