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07-05-02, 03:25 PM
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IP: E1E8 3DBB
structure and wordplay was kinda off, not really a flow with it. but its imagery was on tap. aight peice, think ya could of done better. i aint saying there was nothing bad with this peice but ya could of elevated it. stay up though. peace.
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07-05-02, 03:48 PM
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IP: ADEC 56AC
yo son ur shyt was hott. need more flow. and stop hatin joey juss keep it real. uno
Last edited by synickle : 07-05-02 at 08:49 PM. |
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07-06-02, 09:49 AM
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IP: F8DE F595
was a strong piece...just a good 'perspective' and 'viewpoint' like piece....imagery was good...even though the piece did seem to be at times off...but its all good...nice piece...respect..
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