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Old 08-31-04, 10:58 AM   #1
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Gifted'

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I slaughter'Children' B4 I murder'Million's Kid,
Find me "lyrically'Intuned'wit'god", And on the 5th-crusifix
Severely Mix'n Rhyme's n Untuned'stat's,
Tryna get it legalized in skool'2'carry'base-ball-bat's
Lookin in the mirror'a'various'thug-HYPE
Closin' door's to the "hysteria" For-UnKnown-blood-types

Ayo'Check'it

Third'Type, No affilation to death-world's Hypnotist....
Makin my grade's look like' Einstein's an Arithmatist'..
A maniac They say, Only to "talk-this-way", Is a soulution...
Steppin' 2 a-cat Makin' you just another-wigger-Thats dissaprovin..
Never have shared'In the "love" that we-abusin'...
Clock'Tic's second's never to reverse time that'we'losin...
Takin'out the "hate-and-agony",Just to revert to all these "racial-tragedy's"..
White-black, It's skin-Not-anatomy, Hitten' Like Agassi'
Blowin up the mic's-Like Pearl-harbor'Was lifted-In skool rappin'Was This kid'gifted?
Soul'remain'sLifted, Just a dream And this "involved-hate-wit-fiction"
Lyrical jesus, I need crusifction, Just playin It's the devil who need's Conditined
It's Hitten' Like stoner's gettin' Lifted, Semi-Flipped-it, Wreckage on the ride-dip-shit
Clinically "fucked" Morbidally addicted, Turn ya back on rap, And learn it's just-bliss-bitch
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Old 08-31-04, 03:57 PM   #2
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Good Job.
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Old 08-31-04, 03:59 PM   #3
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Yo feed Don't sleep,
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Old 08-31-04, 05:07 PM   #4
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Old 08-31-04, 06:10 PM   #5
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i like ur wordplay throughout, that's really nice, fa real.. no doubt but yea.. sum parts were a lil' edgey but overall u did ur thing, nice and i like the title too, "Gifted".. keep up your work, aight...
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Old 08-31-04, 06:55 PM   #6
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Old 08-31-04, 06:56 PM   #7
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tite shit...good flow...nice drop dawg...
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Old 08-31-04, 07:16 PM   #8
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thank for the feed still uppin'
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Old 09-01-04, 09:49 AM   #9
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Old 09-01-04, 12:27 PM   #10
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feelin tha topic, and all tha wordplay u mixed in there...shit was nice...flow was good in most parts...Im feelin this piece dawg...nice shit
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Old 09-02-04, 10:02 AM   #11
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Old 09-02-04, 11:53 AM   #12
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thats sum nice shit , keep it up
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Old 09-02-04, 03:52 PM   #13
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