u read the rules now check in

ye man rules r
no dykrydin,
no h8 votes,
10 lines,
& as were in diffrent time zones no time limit but dont take 4 eva.

aight, im droppin my verse in a min.

you made a bold move stepin in the ring wit me wooshy/
i dont know why though, aint shit you can do to me/
where the hell u get a name like that anyway/
crush a punk like you anyday, anyway, anystyle/
fuck a keystyle, or a freestyle, lets take it to the streets/
like Tony Montana, i got a little friend i want you to meet/
put a couple holes in yo frame/
gotta teach you the rules of the game/
first of all dont let yo mom pick out yo rap name/
lastly, after you get KO'd, dont go to the moderators and complain

your bitch ways are jus wack/
theres no way u can come bac/
dont eva get my name confused/
cuz rember wen we finnish my rep wont b abused/
even people from germany have heard of me/
im fast rhyme than a boradband internet from BT/
yo say u from the street/
but everytime i c u, u gettin heat/
ur worse than a leech u cling to other people rhymes worse than cartel druglord/
this means that u cant b adored/

uppin 4 votes

even thou wooshy u wanka u ripped the piss outta me u came harder & punches were more direct
as rayno wasnt all that
vote=WOOSHY

ryan

hilarious, great wordplay
nice lil punch


wooshy
that's a punch but soft
peeps from Germany? that was weak but the fast rhyme thing was hott

overall gotta give my
vote=ryano

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1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

the shit was a fuckin crappy battle wooshy ive seen loads beta from u cmon man. ryano ur not much beta u was a lil off but woosh punches where harder & more direct but ryano was hard aswell

=vote wooshy

yo wooshy, i said that u had to state my name to make sure the rhyme wusnt prewritten, its all good though.

fuck sorry man

has erybody read the rules of the forum? I wasn't sure if everyone saw the rule that sayd for every battle you're in you must vote on 2.

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1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

ryano

- like Tony Montana, i got a little friend i want you to meet/

Only decent line.

WOOSHY

- ur worse than a leech u cling to other people rhymes worse than cartel druglord/

Decent concept for that line, but a weak delivery. Reword that.

This battle wasn't much of anything, but I'm giving this to ryano cause he had at least one decent line.

THIS BATTLE WAS NOT THAT GOOD,BUT I THINK RYANO GOT IT,I THINK HE JUST CAME WIT A STRONGER VERSE THAN WOOSHY....
ONLY LINE I LIKED WAS THE TONY MONTANA ONE...

VOTE=RYANO..
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