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Voted For: NoMercy

sorry this battle has to No Mercy... although neither verse was really all that hot and neither had good punchlines, No Mercy's was a harder verse... he hit wit strong rhymes that could scare somebody (not really but thats what they was meant for) and his flow went along good wit tha rap...

Tanto...
you had no punchlines and your flow was questionable... when you repeated tha word battle, that really brought down your verse. i wouldnt reccomend repeatin a word unless you are using it in a multi rhyme line... aight

v/ No Mercy
both need some elevatin... might wanna cheeck out some of tha threads that are posted in tha "Back Stage" forum for help

Voted For: NoMercy

No Mercy took this one
u need 2 change up ur structure dough
n when u nattle stop talkin bout ur self
attack da other guy

Tanto keep flowin dawg it was could
but using metas personals punches etc.
could make it better atleast u attacked him
dough keep flowin
vote honestly on da battles in my sig

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OPEN BATTLES
WORDPLAYA VS Word-Scape

Tanto: fuck man you suck soo much no hate but you need some fucking sreious elevating man sorry if it ofends u ya rhymes was basic

Nomercy: yours was iight you got this win one sided

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...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

lol thanks this guy thought he was just a balla but just wait i havent been battling the better cats yet i needed some wins so i battled wack fuckas so wait and ill be writen good songs soon these cats im playin with but now i write with harder vocab so ya im comin to the top right away you'll see me in the high bitches shit lol thanks

Voted For: Tanto

tanto wins...even tho it was way shorter, it was still better than no mercy...mercy was actin like he wasnt even in a battle...talkin bout hoes an shit...no punches or wordplay...tanto had 3 decent punches...but he still won this...

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Voted For: NoMercy

ok nomercy murdered here

u did ALOT better here then ur other battle

punches:nomercy
struc:Tanto
flow:Tanto
wordplay:nomercy
overall liked verse
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no mercy

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Voted For: Tanto

Tanto
you must be kiddin me do i have to fight this kid lyrically
->>?? wheres the other line

might not even know what the word battle means
little battle queen
->>flow on point but youre not saying anything...youd be perfect for audio...get a mic

at 4 o'clock i was try'n to battle little one
insted of type'n he was rotating on his uncle's thum
im tell'n ya dawg you dont really want none
->>hah this was cool...

thats all imma give ya
go ahead and figga out what cha gonna spit
frankly what i saw// nigga you aint spittin' worth a shit
->>blah...decent


NoMercy
You got hurt cuz im like a gat spitin rhymes with ease/
Drop you down put you on yer knees, to bag for yer plead you even asked please/
->>wack

i said no, cuz you suck, I beat you fair and square/
I out raped you these bitches saw and heard but didn’t care to stare/.
->>ehh weak rhyming but its decent

I could rhyme in front of 10 hot women to many there all to pretty/
They cute like a kitty, im not scared of them but I give you my pity/.
->>gay as hell...

Now you wanna get that 1000 doller bag of weed donation/
But they wont give it to you, cuz there a hardcore corporation/.
->>what does this mean?

You were scared to attempt thos gurls you thought there was a family relation/
To scared what you sick and need to take yer medication/.
Ill just hafe to take over and have this for my reservation/
Its like im on a vacation there so sweet I took over this situation/.
They shaken there asses in here, there workin it like im a loose sting/
They pouncen on me like me and them a giant spring/.
->>wack


I vote for tanto bc he at least attempted an actual battle verse...nomercy i pray for you if you spit like this against me...your whole verse was some incoherent shit about girls....his was weak but it made me chuckle at least and he was going at you instead of talking about girls...

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lets get 1 more vote for me here i should of won by 5 0 o well i jsut want a win lets get that vote here