Take'Life by it's hand, And "prepare'for'reality"
Kidz'Gettin raped, And black's beat'by Police'Brutalitys'
Same sex marriage, allowed itz homo-sexuality'
What happend to hip hop' and its originality'

George bush Takin troop's 2 iraqi'forces
The rate of Love is 2 years' married then divorcin'
Killing is "illegal" Yet, Legalizin' abortions'
All these "computer's", Makin life's trama'more'distorted'

Whatever'Happend' To love in its purest'form
Only way to "Love" is through gangs'anymore'
Where did "hope" go, It's through and through again'
Only to now notice', This end's a bottom-less-Pit'

The sun shine's daily, Why the docter's'r'killin'babies'
When will we notice' Its murder "not-teen-safety"
If Killin kid's gets'you' Off you have real Issue'
I'll kill you for that shit, and Not even "fetus's"Will-miss-U'

Murder's and thug's All Alike-1-the-same'
Black panther's crip's folk's, and the KKK'
Noone to stop them, Except cival-right-agreement's,
What about them year's, All them slave's were mis-treated'

U don't have to post This page does hold'itz'own'
Nectar'Sweet as honey', But Rap's'This'catz'home;
Like Puppie's to kitten's friend's at the start'
War-makes'wage', And like loose'knit's they fall-apart'

All these "gangster'thug's" I have a new message for you all
You could try2run the world' With Strength's You "un-involved"
I used to rep-the-crips, From the east-2-the-west-side,
Now the only "peep" I rep', Is me and my own'eye's'

All this "rap-tragedy", Wit biggie-and-pac'
Ever listen to the news,They've been dead fer years letTha Controversy-stop'
All my life My goal'was to get my voice'out'2'the'crowd
And now all I want', Is to rap'this'voice'out'loud'

Thanx fer readin' Post...if u please

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nice drop, i liked your vocab but it seems like u got a lil bit off track towards the end and you repeated yourself about the abortion thing. but other than that it was nice, know u didnt ask for a ratin but i give it a 8/10

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-Young Buck

thanx man, Ill peep ur shit ery now n then,

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i like this peice a lot... nothin but truth n thats what should be in everyones shit im just startin out here but out of the couple i read here already you got my vote for best use of vocab n flow n pretty much everything so its nice kid keep it up n holler


holler at yer girl

YEA BABY!!, THAT WAS FIRE KID...

nice flow, CREATIVENESS WAS GOOD, TOPIC WAS GOOD LINES WAS PREETY SLICK N ALL AROUND TIGHT ENJOYED THE READ AND KEEP DROPING THEM LIKE ITS HOT...

HOLLA!!!

VIOLENT TYPE TO THE TOP!!!!

thanx fer the feed yall, Drop sum feed no sleepin'

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Look, I need view's This needs 2 be seen

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Jus' make sure itz viewed

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that shit is raw, this tight, iite