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No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-10-04 at 01:41 AM

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NoMercy has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 01:42 AM.

k heres my verse:

After im threw with you you’ll be resting in the cafeteria/
Ill be runnin all over you like im a sick disgusting germ called bacteria/.
This mothafucka “shake-spear” wanna take me down to my knees/
But ill be the first to make him drop down and put his hands up and freeze/.
He’ll recognize me as the crazy one that runs all over him like a flock of flys/
Ill drop you so fast ill be the one to be saying my good-bye’s/.
Now ill be spitin hard vocab you’ll hafe to look them up in the dictionary/
Ill make you so pist at me ill make you fly yer pussy ass outta her like a faggot canary/.
My style of rap is unknown to you its like im an affection/
To you and how I do it so you better find something for yer own protection/.

shake-spear has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 01:45 AM.

iight heres a lil somtin

he go around tellin poeple hes young. wut u want pitty?/
well its pitiful i can keystyle and beat u that proves u shitty/
no wordplay needed and multi's would destroy-u-fast/
how ya record trash dumbass u think u nice well boy-u-gased/
he know he gon lose so he bets shake'll win to earn-cash/
and i would throw ya rhyme book away but fuck it i burn-trash/
ull learn-fast, cause nomercy beatin me is ridiculous/
make u lick-ya-lips ,pucker up, and give my dick-a-kiss/
if dis kid-is-sick he da common cold im syphilis/
battlin me is like suicide u might as well have slit-ya-wrist/

i know its weak but he said no pre-writes so fuck it

lol good battle man now we would be uppin now

uppin.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,., .,.,

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uppin

Voted For: shake-spear

wow this shyt was a landslide EAZY !!!!!

Punches - Shake...dis nigga rashed on no mercy...have of mercys shyt aint even make sense...punches was weak

Personals - blahh...tie...nuttin really personal...i tihnk u both had like 1 a piece

Meta4s - blah...tie...both verses were pretty simple

Wordplay - Shake... he had minor wordplay in order to make some of his barz rhyme...pretty decent ish

Creativity - blahhh...like i sed b4 they was both pretty simple but Shake did his thing on that

Enjoyment - Shake...by far smashed no mercy no question...punches were harder n more direct n dat took da cake on this battle

"no wordplay needed and multi's would destroy-u-fast/
how ya record trash dumbass u think u nice well boy-u-gased/
he know he gon lose so he bets shake'll win to earn-cash/
and i would throw ya rhyme book away but fuck it i burn-trash"

^^ITS A WRAP...lmao

Vote - Shakespear....~1~



return da favor on da battle in my sig

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Voted For: NoMercy

yo shakespear was better by far no telling what he will do next.

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can we get some honest votes i had way better wordplay by far man read the songs or dont vote

lol uppin for votes and i dont know how u got a vote but i guess ima leave it there even know it made no sence

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Voted For: shake-spear

Aight Then....
Okay Battle...
Few Hard Hittin Punches From Both...

Ya'll Had Some Aight Structure So I Was Feelin Both The Melodies...

I Think Shake Had Better Metas n Had Good Usage Of Multies So He Gets My Vote....

P E A C E

Return The Favor....!!!

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^you cant vote on this battle were in the same crew