All you cats out there kill me swearing your topical geniuses..... Just because someone hasn't dropped a gem on you lately dont sleep. This is an old piece in Rapbattles orgiinal topical tourney. This is what a topical is supposed to be, Peace.



Blind Fury- When sanity goes out the window

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------

IP: 80EF 45DD


She was everything I could imagine, how'd she get caught up in all these lies
Just yesterday I was planning our wedding, today Im plotting her demise
I can't describe these feelings, you could only imagine my surprise
The day I opened up the letter that was never meant to cross my eyes
The letter read "Dear Sarah, Thanks for coming to visit me last week"
"Its amazing how our love has grown from just a simple kiss on the cheek"
"I know you have a boyfriend,and Im sorry if loving you is a crime"
"But Ive dreamt about your visit and us making love a hundred times"
Now I know Im not alone and some of youve been in this boat
My hands began to sweat, I felt my heart inside my throat
See last weekend Sarah took a trip supposedly visiting close friends
Was our love just an illusion, was everything just all pretend
Just then I became enraged, A feeling like Ive never felt before
A "Blind Fury" overcame me, I grabbed my coat and hit the door
I slammed the gear shift in reverse, the speach I had rehearsed
I'd say "Sarah why'd you do this to me?"being careful not to curse
She'd say she didnt mean to hurt me, and everything would be alright
She'd kiss me on the cheek while crying, and hold me tight into the night
I wish I could say it went down like this but if I did well I'd be lying
Cuz the only thing going thru my head, was man this BITCH IS DYING!
I imagined her telling me it was over, how she met someone and was leaving
That the minute my mental snapped, fuck loving her,I was getting even
I pulled up at her house a strange car was running in the drive
"Man I fucking knew it, Im going to beat this bitch alive"
So I burst inside the house, I could feel that something just wasn't right
I ran upstairs to Sarahs room, opened the door turned on the light
My life was like a movie scene,but no movie could have ever wrote this plot
See Sarah lied motionless on the floor, it appeared that she'd been shot
Her Killer, the other boyfriend, he grasped the bloody letter in his hand
It said" Im sorry I cant do this anymore, See I TRULY LOVE THIS MAN"

__________________


I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

Dont sleep this is for all you topical heads, who swear their all that. one.

__________________


I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

That is a pretty tight verse..

But Ive seen just as good from some of the topical textees here..

__________________
RIP jono, peace out bboy.
Pardon Canada Criminal Record Pardons Services Toronto

Vango doin tight shit. Naptown!

__________________
Grim

Hahah VAn....word

__________________

good looking dv, and g-deuce you know im holding it down for the sleepy city.

__________________


I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

its compaRABLE TO SOME OF THE DROPS I SEE IN RV

you have 63 posts, dont bother commenting.

__________________


I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

actually i have 900 posts not including this alias so please don't be rude n im topocally nice, so my opinion is ok not a vet but i now how ta write,,,vets are overrated anyhow.....so vango with all do respect i will comment if i want...
8/10 topical..........

so who are you. do i know you.

__________________


I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

like i said good drop but not to be named tha best but one of tha good ones

appreciate it virtue.

__________________


I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

it was lyricaly good, for me. Got it to a new level.

__________________
[certified gangsta]