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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Phantom 3 37.50%
E Looch 5 62.50%
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Old 09-09-04, 02:21 PM   #31
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Voted For: E Looch

Phantom- had the better opener, a fair amount of punches.. some hard hittin' to, wordplay was good.. structure was a lil' shakey.. but not bad at all.. very nice Phantom.. (8/10)

E Looch- had the better closer, his wordplay out-weighed Phantoms with the complexity.. as well as the creativitie, esp. in the closer mentionin' the cereal-life-veins-inject-arms, it was simple yet complex.. ya structure was better barely.. vocab was sic as usual.. punches delivered very smoothly however, Phantom had better punches in my opinion.. but as personals go u took it, since the first bar... although i did like Phantoms.. part that said:
faggot, wearin mini skirts and high-heels aint a 'he-man' strong thing...
i wanna "disperse" my verse, but then i'd be battlin ya personal belongings...
^very funny.. lmfao.. hee hee..

this is one of the closest battles, i've seen thus far but E Looch took this barely... but both of y'all were fuckin' sik wit it..
best lines: Phantom..
"son you like im my home state, quickly blow by you with ease...
i handle herbs, think about it, im from cali, i gotta 'palm trees'..."

best lines: E Looch
"sorry for gettin outta character i normally dont talk 2 phans
but he stays lookin 4 E like near sighted people at eye exams"
lmfao..

good job and good luck with this 2 both..
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hold up i spent this time voting, and writin' a good explanation, y'all should visit my battle in my sig drop a vote, highly recommended!!!!!!! lol
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Old 09-09-04, 02:52 PM   #32
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Voted For: Phantom

OMG... Phantom wins this one... ouch... tite...
Phantom I was really feelin' your wordplay... I got it... lol

Metas: Phantom
Punches: Phantom
Structure: Phantom
Wordplay: Phantom

E Looch you came good man... much props... I seen you merk Empire...lol... Phantom just got you on that one... just keep workin' on it I can't tell you really what to work on cuz you two are vets and you know what you gotta do... keep it up and gl to both of you.

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Old 09-09-04, 07:33 PM   #33
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Voted For: Phantom

Aight, Nice Battle....

Kinda Hard To Choose Who Got This One..

I Think Phantoim Had Better Wordplay n Used His Vocab Alot Better, Couldda Hit Wit Harder Punches But On The Whole Nice Drop

Looch Ya Rhymes Was Aight, U Lacked Creativeity, Didnt Really Say Anythin Humouress Or That Caughty My Eye, Ya Know?

Nice Drop Tho, Keep Em Comin Ya'll..

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Old 09-10-04, 10:28 AM   #34
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up for non idiots to vote
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Old 09-10-04, 04:40 PM   #35
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awww looch, you were talkin bout all dis "dont bitch about the votes" but got it reopened, i dont care tho, shits a good battle, none of this net-beef crap neither....up.
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Old 09-10-04, 06:49 PM   #36
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fo real this was a really good battle both did well
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Old 09-10-04, 09:31 PM   #37
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E Looch
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent...shit was kinda stretchy tho...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

[b]Phantom[b]
Punches were good too not as hard as E Looch's tho...
Structure was good..yo shit was too strechy tho...
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...
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