~Peepers~
I first met you, surprised at your style, took awhile
to dial ya number the first time, glad I walked that mile
we chilled together, my heart filled with feathers
you tethered my mind with your name, Heather....

~Symmetrik~
Wheather it was love at first sight is MISTERY,...
But this is Bliss to me,.. right feelings complete history,...
deafeat misery,... and make this lyrikal wizadry,....
Spiritual connection's and link's Collide,...
i think of Intense heat that boils inside,...
Coils and shapes tha heart to Drive,...
Knowing everything is correct with you by my Side,...

~Peepers~
The moon eclipses your aura, i am not fazed
Continue to raise when i have harvested thru the days
Your glow eluminates my gloomy fate..
together we can be mates, and just chill on dates
no pressure and no overbearing measures
on leisure the look in your eyes brings pleasure....

~Symmetrik~
Like a Tresure,... stolen then Multiplied by five,...
So breath and check you'r alive,...
Together we can Survive,... and continue,...
it's simple,.. Smells of me rise and defuse within you,...
Confuse the weak hearted,.. on a new scale,...
i haven't even started,... and A new level prevails,...
Trails,... behind nothing less than the future,...

~Peepers~
The few truths held by my world....
the emotional loot can be felt by my girl...
see the sunset? I'm at a loss for expression,
If i've won yet is no longer the question,
Dealing, Can't be much more than hormones i'm feeling
as i'm kneeling at your presence, mind's reeling
heart's actually content, hence life's changing
ranging from good to better, no more straining

~Symmetrik~
Concluding argument's,.. to stop sudden complaing,..
Refraining Sighs,.. to comprise on the different,....
Rise like the atmosphere in an Instant,...
Poetic cheer's,.. grow to cheat, but I can't,...
Sleek images' are exchanged in my complex box,...
Aimed,... at objects,... that stretch the locks,...
With subjects,... Trapped to connect the dots,...
Of projects shocks,.. holding the Mic' as the ground Rocks,...
sound,... Vibrates,... to complete you'r Frame,...

~Peepers~
apocalyptic lands I still feel your soft hands
bury a man's superiorarity complex in the sands
Together we are true, how god made us, brand new
Few could ever experience this emotional "glue"
no favors due, only equality between lovers
the seen covers on our mentality, no longer hovers
freedom furthers our paradise like mythical Atlantis
perfection in our sections, thank god more than a praying mantis
fantasy only way to explain your eyes in mine
time and time, i see what i've dreamed, pies in the sky

This is iLL, the concept was explored well and the ideas were delivered well, some of the lines were strong and powerful mos of this caught my eye... Both of ya combined well, I know Symmetrik and Peepers I seen you on ES* board... The flow was nice, multies were strong and provided you with the rhythm, some internal rhymes helped the flow stay on point, and nothing was choppy... Vocab was always there, the language helped with the imagery and the knowledge words were nice... Wordplay was on point, liked the ideas that come out of here, everything worked together to produce a decent and solid piece, keep dropping the gems...

Peez...

Damn, thx for the reply

i liked it..........