tryin so hard to hold every thing in place by tellin lies to every one to make tem feel happy//
ur notin but a rotten maple tree just to damn sappy//
but to urslef u think im doin my self a great favor//
workin at home is easy tis aint no labor//
passin ur life by givin false lies//
but in tha end everyone tries//
to get thier lives back to normal by tellin tha truth//
go to tha church and confess ur sins in a blessed booth//
to a preist tat will tell u to recite a few hail marys and to read a passage from tha bible//
and to make u relize tat unled lies wont help u in ur chance of survival//
but will lead u to ur death on tha crucifix//
u aint christ so no one is gonna catch tha blood tat drips//
from ur dyin body and ur soul will be releashed//
but is held down by tha leash//
of all tha lies u told to get by in life and tis is wat u punishment is from now on//
even if tha whole world is gone//
u will be left down to die here//
wen tha world whishpers wat everyones fear//
was and u try to run but u cant so face ur final judgement//
its to late for ur ass to repent//

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67-30-46 combined overall on rb


keep lethal in thy beatin heart/
let thy tactix slip life falls apart/


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I HATE YOU MAD THIS SO SHORT FOR SO MUCH REALIZM HERE YOU SCRATCHED THE MIND FOR A VERSE IT KILLS A CLIMAX BUT FOR A SONG THIS WOULD BE A TIGHT FIRST VERSE YOU HAVE TO KEEP THIS ONE GOING ON ANOTHER POST AND IF YOU LIKE HIT ME FOR A COLLAB

yo theres gonna be second one of of tis and of course i would do a callab wit u i do it tis way just so tat tha others ill have to wait for tha second part it makes me feel like i have an upper hand in tis yo m e-mail address is rapgod17@aol.com so if u want to holla at me do it

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67-30-46 combined overall on rb


keep lethal in thy beatin heart/
let thy tactix slip life falls apart/


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yo i dont have aol just give me a subject and ill have a verse in a half hour

nice piece..one of the realest pieces i've read in a while..keep it up..and always elevate..much luv..God bless..1.

there was much truth in this joint, i was feelin' it. like man said, it coulda been longer. otherwise, nice wordplay, lines were a little sloppy, but it was still on point.