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Old 09-10-04, 01:07 AM   #1
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Why????

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Topic: Why


Why do we live in a country thats full of racism...
Why do we have a president thats full of hate in him...
Why did he say we need to find weapons of mass destruction..
And why we still in war after searchin and we found nothin..
Isn't Bush suppost to keep his promise and have commitment...
But then why did he say he'll take care of poverty but didn't.....
Why is it soon cuz of war we about to have another draft...
And why is it quickly in the towers two jet planes sadley crashed..
Why's it my teach the one dat felt the pain flyin into the pentagon..
And tell me why is bush usin that moment to get our men kept strong...
Why does he always use nine/eleven as an excuse to go to war...
Why is it that some of our men fightin dont' know wut they fightin for..
Why is it some of the men fightin don't even care for our country...
And tell me why is it that the U.S. only cares of makin money..
Why is it after fightin for one year they about to come home with honor..
But right before they come they're told to stay just only six months longer...
Why is it who we trust the most is the one who decieves us...
And the only one we could trust most is our Savior Lord Jesus...
Why is it we go through high school knowin later we gonna drop out..
Why are people even votin for someone that they know shyt about...
Why are people tryin ta be someone they don't even wanna be...
But Why is making it through college at such a low possibility...
Why is it that the rich never have to face somethin really scary...
Like da only way for me ta pay for college is to join the military...
Why is it that only the rich people live a life thats so humble...
When the poor like me gotta live a life 40 years full of struggle...
Why's it im the only one in my fam dats a U.S. citizen...
And that everyone else in my fam got here as a imigrant...
Why's it I do everything and no one does nething for me...
And tell me why can everyone relate to this type of story..
Im glad you read this verse, n hope it was worth your time...
I just hope you finally know the truth after you've heard mine..


This shyt is all true

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Old 09-10-04, 01:11 AM   #2
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good messages i guess, but quit usin jada's style, that type of shit can only work once ufeel me, good direction, wrong way to write it....its strait n all, but jadakiss is the only one that should keep sayin why over n over again, no hate, peace
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man sinn u one crazy fuck but u come tight wit ur lines i like reading ur shit ur one of da few kats on dis shit dat keep it real
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Old 09-11-04, 02:57 AM   #3
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its coo...uppin
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Old 09-11-04, 06:08 AM   #4
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didnt I.Mind write that? unless u r I.Mind
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Old 09-11-04, 01:59 PM   #5
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this is one of the better pieces in here right now,this kinda drop is whats keepin this forum from turning to shit, nice job gurl, feelin this, your a skilled writer and i appreciate reading your pieces........1(peep my poem, when positive atoms collide) i think you'll like it....................peace
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Old 09-11-04, 02:30 PM   #6
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thanx....uppin
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Old 09-11-04, 02:33 PM   #7
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imma check dat out fluid
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Old 09-11-04, 11:01 PM   #8
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this was a very nice piece..you had some ups and downs in your piece..but it was good since it was probabbly inspired by Jada... nice structure.. good feelin..overall nice drop overall ..keep it up
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Old 09-12-04, 01:31 AM   #9
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nice drop .but this why? shit has been done too many times after jada...get original man....pz
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Old 09-16-04, 08:27 PM   #10
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lol...get original??i'l kill u in a topical netime..
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Old 09-17-04, 04:18 AM   #11
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Angry Jada's a biter... fake ni99a

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U dag right that topic is played.... been done before Jada too!!.. listen to this trak I wrote in 2002 and recorded in 2003... Jada needs to get original wit his topicz... biterzzzz..

LINK: www.se7ensandman.com/trakz/TGSET/why.exe
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Old 10-10-04, 05:24 PM   #12
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uppin for this open mic!!! lol
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Old 10-10-04, 05:31 PM   #13
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Quote:
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didnt I.Mind write that? unless u r I.Mind


word.he failed to answer that question ...
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Old 10-10-04, 05:40 PM   #14
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LOL.. too amny open mics about this.. but your was the best so far.....
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Old 10-10-04, 05:47 PM   #15
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word.he failed to answer that question ...


lol yea i am!!! lol..happy now!
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