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09-10-04, 10:38 PM | #1 | ||||||
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The Curse Of -LÎ\/€Ñ L€géñÐ-(hard short verse)
IP: A3A8 2C46
Bitchez iz Cursed……by my forbidden-trance-presence ma wordz-iz-written- as a-Transgression$
Force’n me 2 carry ma Smith’n-Wess’n, this is “The Curse of a Liven Legend”$ Demonz “iz-Callin-Me”,takin me deepa threw tha tales-of-ma-Mythology$ Which keeps ma “shit-poppin-g”, so I won’t fail-n-ma-physiology$ Enemyz trynna resist-me like imma Grim Wheepa because I’m Bringing Death$ They all Bitchez-g n tha society, so I’m Laying em down 2 Rest$ Leave bitchez depressed, like “hell-or-heaven” when u reach me datz-yo-fate$ Always “prevail-as-a-legend” so you’ll last and blast-wit-hate$ I’m not a acceptance by tha bright, or dark side,tha reason I remain-immortal$ Ma curse….i contain-Portals, so my Domain-neva-Prefurr-hoes$ Choose’n me as ya enemy u committin suicidal-actions$ I’m bringing Homicidal-attractions screamin “Die-hoe-in-compassion”$ U can’t fuck wit me, not sayin I gotta-disease$ Heave u deceased spiritually trust-me u don’t wonna get shot-up-g$ I’ll let u bomb “First-wit-ya-Given-Protection”$ But it won’t stand fo “Tha-Curse-Of-A-Liven-Legend”$ |
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09-11-04, 03:07 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 9BAC C716
$uppin fo feedz$
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09-11-04, 06:13 PM | #3 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: 28AD 5545
NICE WORDPLAY I ACTUALLY LIKE THIS PEICE ALOT........
REAL NICE GET TO ME ON AIM AND WE CAN TALK BOUT SOMTIN AIGHT PLEASE DO THAT......... 8/10 or 8.5/10 NICE!!!
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Standin' on the corner straight slangin' rocks Aw shit! Here comes the muthafuckin' cops! So I dash, I ducks, and I hides behind a tree Makin' sure the muthafuckas don't see me Now my fat sack of rocks hell yeah i stuffed 'em Police on my draws, i had to pause And yeah, it's still muthafuck 'em Now my game is tight, tight as fuck is my game" |
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09-11-04, 11:12 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: C56C 93CC
this was a prettty decent read but the structure was fuked as hell... i didint really like those $$ at the end of the sentence or lines what ever you wanna call it ...but anyways ..you had some nice wordplay..and thats what cought my eye... you had some okay punch's...overall coming from a new commer nice drop
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09-11-04, 11:14 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 9BAC C716
haha thanx yo $uppin$
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