rules 5-10 lines

no crew or beef votes

u got 10 minutes to post...........

I didn't read the line max, so it's 12 lines, actually I was still going, until I did look at the max

Intellectual claimin he’s smart, I’ll take him Asunder/
Dumber, than the president waving at Stevie Wonder/
Avatars Omega, well I’m like wolverine/
And take claws to your jaws, neck and Spleen/
In a world so gay, gay, fag and queer wont do/
That’s why it can’t be described by words, probably run by you/
And you claim your not a battle rapper, your week spittin/
Waited like 10 minutes to respond in Bitch smacked, prolly got a prewritten/
I eat Emcee’s, Chewable like Centrum/
I eat all my vitamins, and all your bats I bent em/
I’ve been to Bally’s, you’ve been to Sally’s/
To get your hair done, before you go to gay rallies/

Hurry up already

i said 10 minutes i took 9 minutes.........

Damn I must have took like 4 mins then lol

Anyway, start voting now peeps

THIS WAS A CLOSE BATTLE (whch isn't saying much) YALL ARE BOTH TRYING TOOO HARD. VOCAB ON BOTH SIDES WAS WEAK, NO REAL PUNCHES TO SPEAK OF, AND RHYME STRUCTURE WAS LACKIN, BUT IF I HAVE TA GIVE IT TA SOMEONE ILL GO WITH INTELLECTUAL. HE HAD A COUPLE OF AIIGHT LINES NOTHIN MAJOR THOUGH. YALL NEED SOME PRACTICE FOR REAL....

intellectual 1

onslaught o

i agree with LOC


i go with intell.

2-0 i am up?

lol Im loozin, that's funny

Intellectual ~ you had a lot of attempted punches. but, they were not clever at all. u just took two similarities and put like in them. not affective at all. any one can say.. 'ur weak like dick cheneys arteries' but if u said somethin like.. '3 shots at dick cheneys arteries still doesnt compare to your weakness..'(blah..) or some shit like that, is much more affective.. just try and be clever..

OnSlaught ~ you had better punches.. they were just really played.. and simple.. your flow was good.. pretty much a newbish verse... u really had no personals except the one which was kinda lame..

Both ~ both of you need to work on your multis.. even simple ones like: ass beating, last meeting, past bleeding. notice how all the syllables rhyme.. that improves your flow dramatically.. both of you have a lot of improving to do..i know intellectual has a large vocab that he didnt display in here.. but onslaught, ya need to expand ya vocab..

Final Thought ~ it was close.. but.. intellectual you had better flow.. all u gotta do is spread ur vocab around a little.. and get ur punches cleverer... but u did pull it out because of the tons of attempted punches.. and they werent AS played.. onslaught.. just.. work on ur multis.. and harder punches..

Vote ~ Intellectual

3-0 i win by KO

thanks for ur vote guys

and nuclear thanks for explaining what i need to work on......