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Check in by: 09-12-04 at 02:58 PM

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afropimp has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 02:33 PM.

Street poet has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 02:39 PM.

poet will get to work.............. and add an L to your record
I'll box your ears and slant your eyes... like chinese checkers
This n00b in disquise............. should realize he's despized
Whos and whats arent the only question... theres also your wise (whys)
Your verse was dope?... Fuck that i'm taking it to a new planet
The voters had to stomp on their keyboards just to withstand it
You see.. I can come half assed and still youd think I was J.Lo
This herb reminds me of a hair dryer the way that fro Blows
I'm ending this merking now........ We'll have to do this again
This clothesing will scratch your record........ Like new linen (clothesing= Closing... Linen= itchy)

hmmmmmmmmmmm 2 barz 1 line here we go=5 lines

..Im Straight Gunnin' This Fool..My Punches 'Flow And Inflict Him'..This Hoe Is A Victim Throwed To A Dictum..My Blows Gunna Hit Him..You merkin' me?..Son Im Gunna Have You 'Grabbin Ya Throat And Gasping For Breath' Like "Pneumonia Symptoms"..!!(WHAT)
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..What? You Want Bar 2?..
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..Punches? Ya Wack With Them..Fuck Ya Personals..They Like 'Harrmless Criticism'..They Cant "Bother Me..But My Shit?..It Will "Slaughter-G"..Cuz Im Gunna Have My 'Punches Pickin At Ya Brain'..When I 'Shove My Hands Up Ya Nose' Like A Fuckin' "Labotomy"..(GOOD NIGHT)

YEA ITS LIKE THAT HOMIE

im back in tha verse// haunt u like a curse
i got ill rimes that work urs are tha worse
im on target like tha store
you aint got wat it take u need more
ready for war// to settle tha score
with tha contraversy i spit//
im killin this bitch// fast and quik
u a tragedy like tha day u joined*
hit u like tha planes// kill u and all ur boys
play u like a toy
this man cant flow not even street poetry
ur rimes couldnt bench 10 cuz they so damn week
bout to be 15 a young ass g// leave you poetry flat all over the streets

*joined on 9 11

votes uppin damn it lets gooooooooooooooooooooo

Voted For: Street poet

holy this newbs good ouch hes beating afro pimp well hes not that good not even close to a vet but anyway street poet took this in a hart beat:
punchesoet
vocab: afro
metas: poet
multi's: poet
operner: poet
closener: poet
v/ streetpoet 6.5/10
return the favour in my battle verse turnheads thanks peace tha links in my sig thanks

uppin for some honest votes nice drop playa uppin

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Voted For: Street poet

DAMN!!!!! STREET POET TOOK THIS 1 HIS STRUCTURE,METAS,PUNCHES,MULTIS PERSONALS WAS ALL HOT...SOME WORDPLAY VOCAB WAS GOOD VERSE WAS HOT MAYN..

Dats Whats Good Homie Uppin

Uppin Come On Peeps Dont Sleep Lets Go Peoplez

yo uppin dont sleep come on lets go

yo fo realz homie uppin

Voted For: Street poet

ya streey poet won this one fo sho, he had much better vocab and flow.
afro u r way too basic, but its ok ull learn fast on dis site
i vote for poet cuz he knew what he was doin.

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