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Old 09-12-04, 02:35 PM   #1
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jail or death * it needs work *

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i just did this real quick and put whatever came to my mind.......

I.E on the stand pleding but i know what happen
who had the guns N who did the clapp'in
who was fram like a picture
cuz every niggas was hate'in claiming to get-ya
cuz i serve more nigga then a waiter
and had more nigga set up then a cater
just cant accpet the new O.G
seeling O.Z to stranger and cats who know me
posted like potrol cops carrying a burner
told moms nigga was trying to get me N this problem dont concer her
so i tossed on my vest N straped up like a bra
drag'ed shells in a bag N hoped in the car
stomped on the gas so hard the peddle broke
couldnt stop so my bumper landed in the living room N meet-he's folks
jump'ed out and clap once clap twice
thought niggas was dead but only hit a fuck'in mice
got hit in the back of the head and had my skull splice
drop still, couldnt move bleeding to death
my life flash quick saw the hate from when it started as kids
no constrction worker but i was already carryin brick's
stab'in a bitch, for laugh'in at my dick when he stood up just from grabb'in her tit's
i aint having this shit, started stab'in her clit till it look like her blood was having a piss
thats only half of what u get, the rest i cant say cuz i regret
cuz i was steaming of course
but i actully thought it felt better fucking a dead corpse
couldnt tell what hit me i came back to the present,
still knowing i was packing my weapon
but couldnt grab N shot or even levft my boot
i wanted to die to bad and thats the truth
the cops came picked me up and rushed out
while my blood was like a filled bollow with water the way it bust out
dont remember shit beside waking up in the court room pleding my life sentence or the death penalty
but i got traped with fags for life N it was only my first fellony
shit..........................
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Old 09-12-04, 02:44 PM   #2
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wazn't bad for u jus putting it together fast! U still had a nice word play and flow!
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Old 09-12-04, 04:40 PM   #3
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thanks....

yea i just put it together real quick no real deep thought into it just what came to my head....

thanks again...

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