//putting “tha row” on death row//

The phone rings I answer some one says “ yo I got a new mission”/
The fbi says I’m to assassinate suge knight cause he’s under a drug trafficking suspicion/
Rather then trying to arrest him they just want him dead/
They offer me first but if I don’t there will be a million on his head/
I’m suppose to get in close without anyone knowing that I’m a fed/
Kurupt is on our side I’m going to talk to him first/
“What made him turn on his friends?” I ask, they say “ his money thirst”/

Get off the plane now I’m in L.A./
Got enough clothes and ammo packed for a three month stay/
My audition is at one case a new rapper is the character I gotta play/
Thinking haven’t rapped since school but back then I wasn’t bad/
Get on the mic drop a freestyle listen surprised I still got it that makes me glad/
Suge says he likes my roll but I need a deeper vocabulary/
Kurupt speaks up “either way he’s the type of emcee that would be fine beside me”/
Suge says” well I guess that makes sense” and as a joke hands me a dictionary/

Suge invited me to a party he said it would be illin/
But the only thing really on my mind was the killin/
Up here for three weeks no murder but I’ve reordered a couple of tracks/
But with the size of tha row I see why the fbi wonders about those dollar stacks/
Talking to kurupt as the d.j spins I say I need a few facts/
Kurupt gives me enough that I could just arrest him/
With how close of friends we’re getting though I don’t think I could even to that to him/

I can’t kill a friend but if I don’t it’s my job/
If I don’t some one will then I’ll be left to sob/
With the thoughts in my head I start to drinking to help me consider/
But now I’m drunk the only scream I hear is from my liver/
They snuck in quietly droppin in from the roof like a spider/
If your wondering who I’m talking about I mean my assassin/
Five shots before I notice now in front of my eyes my entire life is flashin/
I wasn’t even gonna kill him I end my life wondering who told him//

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

Thats nice man, its something different thats what I liked about it, the story was quite detailed and you described everything quite well... The flow was a bit choppy, I thought you needed some internal rhymes and it woulda been flawless, multies were good... The wordplay was aight, not a lot include, but you made up for it through imagery... Vocab again werent bad, but it could be worked on... The twist at the end was nice though, I liked the whole story and how ya explained it... Gonna be looking out for more of your work, mos def feeling the originality though, thats important... Keep dropping the gems sun...

Peez...

uppin this

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

lol if only someone would muder that ignorant mutha fucka. nah this was tight tho ya kno injectin sum originality into RB. flow was a bit off in sum places but overall it was good wit sum very nice lines. aight check mine bent politicians