i thought thiz day could never come
all the bullshit we went through and done
u had me checked at school for coke, pills and pot
lil did u know i waz to good to get caught
see it was all good but u had to be a snitch
telling what i told you and being a bitch
u couldn't jus talk it out with me
open your eyes and just see
u jus lost ur best friend for doing somethin stupid
i was always there, for u i waz willing to play cuipd
hooking u up with all the guys u have dated
i could have had them ,but u liked them so i waited
u were 1st, even before my boi
u ran ur mouth like one of those dumbass toys
i'd kick our ass but when u came back down u'd bounce me off earth
go a head test me, see how much i can take, our friendship ain't worth
i'd knock u off ur feet so fast, u couldn't yell stop
1st the right,,, then left,,, then a loud ***pop
and out of this you just had to prove that ur bad
but u telling made thiz chick real real mad
i told u once i'll tell u again
i'm the badest bitch that ever lived


Wazn't the best but itz bullshit my (ex) best friend went and told the school i had pot! She needs to get her facts straight before she runs her mouth. So thiz waz jus sumthin to get it off my chest!

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So what chicks can rap too/
you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/

Respect List:
AKA (down, and keepin it real)
KoObOo (A true friend wouldn't be the right words)
The Disciple (mmmm Tight probbly wouldn't be the word) lol
Tony Montana (thiz my main boi for rapping)
Ciara Myst (hey if u cant beat em', join em')
phatom (he jus got skill)
LivenLegend ( thiz my friend for life)
fluidmoon (she got ova half ya'll beat)

This was ok, but not really a poem style, it was more like an open mic because of the way you wrote it and the lyrical content, yea, i think with your style you should try open mics, you would do well in there, just work on your spelling and grammar, but it was good gurl, just being honest with you, no hate whatsoever

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*FluidMusic*


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