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Voted For: Most



like memories of past trances~ya lyrics are played out like mc hammer dances
with lack of any skills~my punchlines will end ya career faster then hanson's
^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE MAYNE AND OPENER NICE PUNCH

ya lyrics are sustaining structural damage~have ya record falling apart like the twin towers
i know u think ya big but ya not~devastating lyrics leave u living in a trailer like pierre bowers *
^^^^^^^^^ EHHHHHHH NOT AN GOOD PUNCH KINDA AN FILLER

ya shot of winning is off~kinda like parapalegic's trying to play golf
i know ya lyrics come cold~ya probably what they meant by putting ice in smirnoff
^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE WORDPLAY AND A PUNCH

like a news reporter~i wait around for the night cap (votes)
u beating me is unlikely~cause their's a better chance of stevie wonder getting his sight back
^^^^^^^^^^ HA HA NICE MAYNE (BEST PUNCH IN YO VERSE)

like specific design patterns taking from a blueprint~my lyrics put a studda in ya words like ruben **
punchlines shipping u through customs~while personals put u under my command like i'm fidel and ya cuban
^^^^^^^^^ UM KINDA AN PERSONAL PUNCH BUT NOT AN GOOD ONE

with lyrically explicit arsenals of quick witted words~i release from my tonuge
ya going for a reach ya trying~but ya punchlines don't land...not even one
^^^^^^^^^^^^ OK DAT WAS SOME FLOW GOOD

i know ya prewrite ya shit~unlike wedding vows ya words ain't connecting
like the court ordered ja i put a statment out and you'll need an order of protection ***
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD CLOSA


Quite simply Quick Witted, ya loose fitted rhymes got me agitated,
ya shits trifle, this battles mine before u got time to contemplate it,
^^^^^^^^^^^ FLOW AND A PUNCH NICE

rhymes are constipated, they burstin out with hammeroids,
i manifest raw logic, pre programmed into me kinda like multiple androids,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ LIL. VOCAB IN DER AND PUNCHES AND FLOW

i cross u out- ya signatures void, my lyrical weapons against u i just deployed,
as for woteva contingent or crew u rep for consider it destroyed.
^^^^^^^^^^^ PERSONAL AND A PUNCN PLUZ

chop off ya fingers n slit ya throat, at the mouth u foaming,
put an end to yer wack text battles, its obvious ur just cloning,
^^^^^^^^^^ PUNCH NIC EMAYNE

some other shit rapper as im zoning, on this rap shit im growing...
my verse is tight n flowing, unlike ur mediocre attempt tho u not knowing,
ur wackness is showing,a deep lesson to u unlearned im now bestowing,
^^^^^^^^^^ FLOW BUT INFANT PUNCHES (WEAK)

plus dick riding aint acceptable here, is that clear?.learn from my quotes,
next thing u b askin 'Poet' for votes,i hope ur takin notes
peep this shit as i teach ya the ways im condensending on ya,
check the lesson i taught ya, i'll scorch ya bringing torture
^^^^^^^^^^^ OK KID U PUT MY NAME ON DER WE GOTS TO BATTLE NO DOUBT ME TAKIN NOTES BLAH 7-0 YEA RIGHT

BUT DAT WAS AN PERONAL AND A PUNCH NICE MAYNE

MOST GOT DIS BY USING PUNCHES AND PERSONALS

QUICK U CAME GOOD WITH DA PUNCHES BUT I DIDNT SEEN ANY PERSONALS USE SOME PERSONALS NEXT TIME MAYNE

V-MOST

~PEACE~

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ohk street poet thanks for the vote...i wasnt mentioning u tho i was meaning 'Poet' from A.I.

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Dats What I Thought Lol J/p

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Voted For: Quick Witted

pretty decent battle

Quick Witted: You were good with the punches. nice wordplay, had a couple of killer lines, the best being the ruben studdard one. Could've worded that punchline better though for a better effect. overall flow was fairly consistent except the glitch in the opener of the 4th bar. Nice work

Most:Nice attempt. you threw in an effective personal towards the end. I think maybe at some spots you were doing some self glorification I wasn't feeling too much and that threw the whole verse off for me. Punches were weak compared to Quicks.

this goes to quick.

Hey if you don't mind could you return the favor? I got a battle with I.Mind that's been up forever that need votes. Greatly appreciated if you do. if not, then FUCK YOU!(joking)
Am I?

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Voted For: Quick Witted

yo quick this was fucking dope good ass flow and punches metaphores hit crazy not really any personals but punches hit hard i was really feeling this good wordplay and dope deleviery structure needs work but fuck it you dropped hard here punches won you this and a good vocab 8.5/10
most dope vocab and good flow wordplay was also nice and structure was good punches hit nice just not as good as quick did and thats why he won over you still you had a dope drop also a 7.5/10

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