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Check in by: 09-18-04 at 09:10 AM

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Quick Witted has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 08:41 AM.

MATTEE1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 08:43 AM.

u broke and pennyless~rap leave u unemployed cause u can't spit
swearing u the best~but the only thing ya 'wrapping' is a subway sandwhich

having trouble comprhending my bars~i'm gonna put it terms that u can understand
ya bars commiting 'vehicular' homicide~lyrics blow u up like the michelin tire man

u an alarm clock hate my lyrics so u snooze~u the pete rose of rap u bet against ya own crew
grab pen and paper pay attention~lyrics have u taking notes like i was ray charles teaching blues

o wins 20 posts and still lacking experience~fag talking shit here's another student to teach
like midgets in a super market grabbing for the top shelved groceries this wins outta ya reach

ya bars are irrelevant to this battle~skills and any type of talent lack in ya text
i warned u~insane flow rip ya heart out lyrically then put it back in ya chest

lll

post before strobe decides to close it

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Voted For: Quick Witted

good verse "banks" lol, you had sum decent punches there. The midget thing is a bit played though... i liked ya opener, nice ... had sum real nice wordplay there too ...

mattee1: ...............................

vote: quick witted

Voted For: Quick Witted

^i dont know wat happened with matee1 maybe he messed upon the post i dont kno but theres no words there lol just lll so watever quick witted won this in every aspect against his lll line theres nothin really to criticize on, quick witted good flow and nice punches but i dont kno if matte1 messed up on his verse so gonna have to pick quick witted

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yo i bloody pressed post by accident i wasent 2 sure as that was ma first day on here

SORRY QUICK WITTED

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just a battler