**intro**

interviewer: johnny 6-feet, it seems lately you've been in a lyrical slump. people reppin' your threads claim your level of vocab and pun useage is more threadbare than a camels knee...

johnny 6-feet: thats because most of my posts in open mic forums across the net are keystyled and spare of the moment.

interviewer: well dont you think its about time you kicked knowledge/

johnny 6-feet: well alright then, where's that pen and pad at?


picture this like kodaks, something to improve ya mood like prozac/
i've now developed myself a system to slap back the wack/
now y'all probably right now, "clueless" like alicia sliverstone/
so here's an explaination to "relax you" like "homegrown"/
i've discovered it takes wit thats sharp enough to split atoms/
to kick knowledge like volleying science text-books, get up and at-'em/
these basic kids, with rhymes thats "elementary" like the "periodic table"/
who cant achieve "elavation" like "crippled birds, balance unstable"/
plus they, sweating pints like fat guys on treadmills in the gym/
they read-this-and-weep like bad gamblers, never onto a win/
can't follow a laid piece with "more twists" than "super-noodles"/
some more "puffed-up" and "faggot-like" than "french-poodles"/
herbs got me "cracking-up" like i was "walking on eggshells"/
they run in packs like wolves, only drop praise for themselves/
many got "more personalities" on SOHH than "schizophrenics"/
how else to get a KO againast an emcee with 10 times their credit?/
ghost votes from members with 2 posts a month/
got me "losing my temper like car-keys", eager to get these weak emcees/
well johnny will get you cross-eyed, hog-tied and flat-lined/
off a 15 minute pre-write lines, they soldiers, dropping in time/
leave wack ones more "aggrivated" than ladies stressed with "pms"/
clothes-line you like "wwe" wrestlers, couldnt pass the "test"/
you sheep "follow the leader" like you was part of "Korn"/
i'm like the spirit of god in eygpt, passover, killing the first born/

**outro**

interviewer: well that about covers the update. this is wendy sucksalot reporting, back to you billy........

pzz.

hahahahahaha, dawg, this was ill like... well nothing compared, you remind me of loud mowf's style from long ago, damn... i liked this dawg, peace 'n' keep spitting


signed,
~madd

that waz tyte my nizz tyte keep doin ya thang

--1huned--

noting compares? yeah? cheers very much to you guys for taking the time to rep to my piece.

uppin this for more feedback.

I LIKED IT USING MULTI'S OR PUNCHES BUT NOW TO ATTACK TO BACK A SUBJECT NATTER ITS NICE

johnny ur flow always seems on point. this was no different. lol to be honest i was feeling ya last drop more but this still tight. check mine out bent politicians another mersey kid reppin for the uk

Very nice wordplay throughout. I enjoyed this except for the "quotes" on everything. For me, it kind of disrupts the read unless the quotation is necessary for an obscure referene.

Quote of Note:
they read-this-and-weep like bad gamblers, never onto a win
Excellent.

Nice drop...keep it up.

Peace

nice flow word play multis and volcab real tight shit my favorite part was

how else to get a KO againast an emcee with 10 times their credit?/
ghost votes from members with 2 posts a month/
got me "losing my temper like car-keys", eager to get these weak emcees/
well johnny will get you cross-eyed, hog-tied and flat-lined/
off a 15 minute pre-write lines, they soldiers, dropping in time/
leave wack ones more "aggrivated" than ladies stressed with "pms"/

hot shyt keep it up ~1~

cheers for the constructive feedback, i appricaite that no-one has replied saying "nice peep mine"

uppin one last time.
pzz.

johhny wherebouts in merseyside ya from?

formby we moved there i was young from southport, most of my fam are in bootle.

Word..Lowd did used to have some tip like this in his flow...not to mention the whole intro/outro thing..he always did that..tight tho

Ay Johnny, i just seen ya name and decided to check out a verse or two..This piece was tight..I was REALLY feelin all the similies..really made the verse interesting and humerous to read..flow was on point..all around nice verse..i was feelin it..

"back to you billy.."

lol...peace.

This is nice man, wordplay infactuated with a strong flow... The concept was nice, been seen it done a coupla times now, but you still produced well... The flow was tidy, a sturdy rhyme scheme with good multies and some inernal rhymes to give it some strength... Vocab was used but balanced, good knowledge words used with the wordplay, and the similes were easily your strongest point... You mos likely to be a battle cat, keep spitting and elevating, look forward to seeing more of your work...

Peez...

for realz, dirty, shitz was nice, keep that goin...1