Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-24-04 at 02:44 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Mc_BaD_bOy has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 02:16 PM.

yo i will snap u back again u cant rap ull mak it rain//
ill slice u into pieces u ugly fuck with no necesse wot a shame//
u wud get u wack as in da hall of fame 4 being a ugly ass lame//
bust ur nose is my game wacko is ur game youngd is his wack as name//
get ur dumb ass of da stage its my turn to give u a hit with my rage//
u hpoe got no doe u cant rhyme so fuck off *i won go turn the page*//



*...*=basicly fuck off/get the hell outta here

youngd has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 02:16 PM.

mah punchs drop ya to ya knees like jena jameson...
hearing crunches by tha bunchs i think this games won...

a field of nettels could not reveal what lurks in mah crainuim...
if boxing were metals consider me steal and you titanuim....

dont flirt call me kurt cuz mah punchs hit from angle...
go blurt yellashirt dead cert they will hurt rip an dismagle...

Voted For: youngd

bad boy, you were very basic in this one, you had no real hard hitting punches, they were all weak, and mainly not directed at youngd, you also had very basic vocabulary, just sayin wack all the time and rhymin "shame, lame, name" and "page, rage" up your vocab and try and direct your punches at the other person, also add some personals into ya verse if ya can.

youngd, you had a better verse, you were using better vocab, but i still felt you could have aimed your punches more towards bad boy as well. you had a nice rhyming scheme though.

both of you try not to use self glory, coz that's not going to get you anywhere in battles, the idea is to diss the other person.

v/ youngd, for coming with a more complex verse.

Voted For: youngd

flow-youngd, good here everything pretty much matched

punches/personals-youngd, lot better punches here and they hit much harder, badboys werent up to par with youngds at all

vocab and creativity-youngd got both, more words that were just better for his vocab and more creative lines, i see the same kind of punches from badboy in every battle hes in (no hate jus truth) gotta elevate on that

good luck peace

__________________

Voted For: youngd

youngd -
mah punchs drop ya to ya knees like jena jameson...
hearing crunches by tha bunchs i think this games won...

nice opener

a field of nettels could not reveal what lurks in mah crainuim...
if boxing were metals consider me steal and you titanuim....

good punch

dont flirt call me kurt cuz mah punchs hit from angle...
go blurt yellashirt dead cert they will hurt rip an dismagle...

didnt really make sense but it was orite

Mc_BaD_bOy -
yo i will snap u back again u cant rap ull mak it rain//

and thats rhymin with what ?

ill slice u into pieces u ugly fuck with no necesse wot a shame//
u wud get u wack as in da hall of fame 4 being a ugly ass lame//
bust ur nose is my game wacko is ur game youngd is his wack as name//

that was a ok bar

get ur dumb ass of da stage its my turn to give u a hit with my rage//
u hpoe got no doe u cant rhyme so fuck off *i won go turn the page*//

orite closer

vote goes to youngd for better punches.

__________________

Voted For: youngd

youngd had the better structure, flow, punches, personals, rhymes, mulits, vocab and wordplay, he came a lot harder then mc bad boy did...mc bad boy you gotta elevate your vocab, and elevate your punhes, your flow and structure was allright...youngds verse 6.6/10...mcbadboys verse 5/10

v/youngd