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09-25-04, 10:18 PM
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Rely-3rd Poem by Pro
IP: 0825 899A
3rd Poem so far Title:Rely Re.....member that the center of all Warm is winter.... And....for every smoove corner there's Lurking a splinter... Man...when you figure there's always a man to lend a Hand.... plan...a rude awakining will happen and you will have no defense... Just...tilt your head and lean left on your own shoulder... cuz...as the world gets colder you're growing and getting older.. plus...when you're alone no man will be there to hear your mutters... Trust...that you can hold your on..you own...don't live in gutters... -intermission- hold...onto to your man hood..clutch and keep it nearer Rely..on the nigga you veiwing in your mirrior..you superior reply...to the qustion of the lesson of the life quest... theres...no one meaning to life's events...just A guess... prayer...is spelled and said to those who's infest with stress... Layers...and stacks of pract....tise nieeded to take action... triggered...by the ones who fake thugs..not real they plastic... Shivered...they are at the thought of death being felt... mainly...because they lean on there click to lend them help... crazy...you thinking you won't face death if a gun is held.... Freedom...righters dying over what we had all along... See ya...is our reply...cuz be sure they didn't die alone.... peace
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09-26-04, 06:17 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
upping for some crits please
I worked hard on ths....peace
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