--- GamebredNupe@collegeclub.com wrote:
> Well I spit it for tha streets and I get it real
> cheap/
> Fill tha flow to tha top wit sickness and spill it
> ova beats/
> One of my boys wit me he probably a killa or a
> thief/
> Paid attention in math tha dime always got a ninner
> underneath/
> So we can both pull tha heat and put some holes in
> ya T/
> God gave his son to give u that mouth but I kan
> klose it for free/
> Niggas scared to handle they biZZness like I'm that
> seat in tha stall/
> Kan't blame'em though kause they know I'll break'em
> like Steven Segal/
> Yall probably str8 pretty niggas wit fingernails and
> yale when one rips/
> A battling session against me is sort of like Tales
> From tha Crypt/
> Split niggas like tha blunt then inhale exhale till
> I lift/
> If smokin be tha death of me fuck it I'll use Hell
> to light mah next spliff/
> Holla at whoever while I turn up tha heat/
> What u know bout shipping that Folgder's out of
> state wit that sherm underneath/
> Str8 hustler baby but don't get it konfused I'm not
> that magazine/
> I be on tha grind wit that nine and a seventeen shot
> magazine/
> Stacking bricks like Tetris while pushin whips by
> Lexus/
> Wit them thangs on'em that turn heads just like tha
> Exorcist/
> When everything falls into place it'll be a
> beautiful sight/
> I kan't make u feel what I'm saying but that
> louisville might/
> Katch me at a match latenight betting 2 mill on a
> fight/
> Not worried kause he killin on sight rippin like a
> mill saw when he bite/
> Got'em red brown black or even tiger-striped/
> I was born wit it like them so I don't even have to
> write/
> Just viscious from birth especially spittin a verse/
> Or a gun while u still pullin done dropped my first
> klip in tha dirt/
> But nevermind that homie because its empty now/
> Survey tha scene niggas is either limpin or down/
> And all tha witnesses and on lookers is holding they
> mouth/
> Kause if he didn't have one before now he got a hole
> in his mouth/
Aight then here he is CENTZ the most gully-
pervers divers cat rip his sleeves of and use them for a scully-
name another rapper twisted enough to do a 187 in the booth-
grab a supersoaker and speradically to show proof-
i aint afrid in reality to shoot-
during a drive bye in a rusty PINTO with the boot-
rollen with PLAYERS like porno advertizment magazines-
spit profanity off listeren- to be an outkast flowing so fresh and so clean-
dawg i make cash money 5 dollars on debit-
name so many names all you here is bleeps on the radio edit-
spit 4 kill 4 and leave the world on a hundred bar credit-
i pay off when i get pist off and turn demented-
given the right insentive-
the only thing reptetive-
i spit -is 16 cartridges of ink on a mafia hit-
featuring GAMBRED- we put prices on all of your heads-
with number 2 leded- force fed it- inersted- to leave you m.c.'s shredded- so if it was beaf you and me i leave and its deaded-get it?
see the rap game-is like anfeddemee slang-reailistically-
you meake currency- based on the weight and dope potency-
so in this im like the next ESACOBAR with bars-that hit hard-the FACE with a SCAR- promoted more then nascar-
see what we do is spit- pre writts-
rap them in bricks-throw them off a building and shit-
to drop a smash hit-
im illmattic- with an auotmattic-
pencil that led stenil my name in the veigns of a herion addict-
painting scene's more tragic than tittanic-
so the world better panic-
im suicidal and manic-
high off depressents-
with a fetish to malest rhymes still in they adolecessants- like coherent-
abussive parents-
i gave bith to your styles i gave em life and can take them out-
i spit a verse per ounce of semon that gets pumped out of LIL KIMS stomach and mouth-

a bit long but as tha usaul its to lethal to be called ill keep it up aight

__________________
67-30-46 combined overall on rb


keep lethal in thy beatin heart/
let thy tactix slip life falls apart/


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this came off like a keystyle more than a prewrite, mostly multi's galore which was the strength of the piece, pretty good. i reckon you should push these rhymes in a specific direction though, to maximise your potential.

I DO THIS WAS FOR FUN AND I NEVER PREWRITE FOR THE NET I JUST FREESTYLE MY MIND IM THE BTTOM GUY