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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-29-04 at 02:28 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

LiL G BrO has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 02:31 PM.

NewKid has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 03:12 PM.

yo new kid=whats ya gonna wit me u cant do no shyt=not even a lil bid=lil bytch=lil witch=fuck you,your poor,your family aint rich=if ya wanna battle juss bring ur last wordz wit ya=fuck you n ur muthaphukkin momma=your a kid that wears a lil spider-man pajama=yo i even seen yo mom in da streetz then i scored her ass=damn it was wet n tight but there was a lil bit of rash=maybe someday ill give u a lil baby bro=cuz i fucked ur momma head-to-toe=we did very slow=she even slept da other ones,man ur mom is a hoe=yall family r dirty livin like a crow=i ratha do it face-to-face better dan playin wit da keyboard=typin some wordz=i made this battle becuz i was bored=but when were done i wanna go grind my skateboard=your family can come hurr suck my dick=first ill ask ur sister to get her first lick=imma find you dont run or hide=juss like bonnie n clyde=when i found you imma kill you=even your gang or crew=ur family too=dats what ill do= kill all yall for no reason i have no clue=you got nuttin=no hunny=no money=no pet no bunny=when you see a clowd rain dats a sign to get ur poor family to get cleaned=wearin da same clothes everyday same jeans=yall livin like dirt=dats what i heard=oh yea i heard your a nerd=your nanny was freaky=is she a gypsy=cut your throat=like a goat=frie you burn you like a toast=clean ur body off hide in da boat=mailed it off to my gang=and tie ur mom wit rope n ship it to my gang so they could have a gang bang=this christmas u will miss it=after you see dis freestyle tryna diss it=livin wit mah crew if u mess wit us=were like jeepers creepers makin you n you crew stuck in da bus=but if we see you n we start to bust=my life is i dont give a fuck=but if i see you well good luck=but if u see me wit my glock dunt duck=ur lifes stuck=ur stuck wit me never let go befoe u die=well try n live=but if u fail ur life ill dig da sand=everywordz that comez outta my mouth tryna understand=after u die ur all bloody n gore=goin to heavens door=ur kneez on da floor=jesus busy tryna finish da war=but ur never invited dis my wordz that i can say atleast=oh shiet i gotta bounce peace.

wiin tha K's fixed..I "Take" this "Pussies Life" like a rapist..
leave his "Soul" "Scarred" up like a old pair of Kswiss..
fag..u like ta "Deep Throat" put mih gun on ya tongue can u take it..

u aint a G or Thug..once i grip tha T(teck)or slug..
blast..have ya Tee n blood..send ya bodi up ta thee above..


look,if u talk crazi and dont respect me man..
have ya chest pop open like a pepsi can..


bam bam.catch flames 2 ya head like biggalo..(bam bam bigallo)
have mih bitches "Fuck" u up like Duece Biggalo..


let tha crew "Rock" ya "Fellas" like hova man..
i tole u that ya rap carrier fuckin ova famn..
stop thinkin u push "Coke" cus ya pops tha soda man..

Wat Tha Hell Is That Ya Structure Was Way Off Hand Mayn

Voted For: NewKid

newkid got my vote
yo it was iight u just need to work on your structor

just giving a fav back

Voted For: NewKid

Opener-New Kid
Closer-New Kid
Vocab-New Kid
Punches-New Kid
Personals-New Kid
Structure-New Kid

Overall Vote= New Kid

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Voted For: LiL G BrO

ok yooo lil g bro u need to work on yo struc like fuckin crazy shit i hate readin paragrpah struc's man dont rite in paragrpahs to ahrd to read, um your vocab and wordplay were decent and your flo was pretty good, your punches hit pretty koo but always work on those man cus u do need a lil elevation but you got him wi a few lines,

New Kid- u must be new man um u shuda rote more, your struc was pretty str8 better than Lil G bro but u also need to work on yo vocab, your ryms were a lil basic but ur style is unique man i felt it, u need to get pucnhes and some of ur lines dint rym ,

my vote goes to lil g bro for a better all around verse

v/lil g bro

yall retrun da favor man NO HATE go to me vs blinkz please man no hate votes!

Thas A D/r But Uppin Fa Votes Honest Votes And No D/r's

Voted For: NewKid

OMG LOL LIL G BRO IT LOOK LIKE U HAD GOOD FLOWZ (NOT)

PUNHCES (NOT)

CAUSE I COULDNT READ IT MAYNE DAYUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


NEWKID GOT DIS BECUZ OF HARDER FLOWZ AND PUNCHES AND EASY TO READ

LIL G BRO WORK ON DEM STRUTURE AND.............UM JUST STRUTURE

IT LOOKS LIKE U HAD FLOW AND PUNCHES BUT COULDNT READ

IT

V-NEWKID CAUSE OF GOOD PUNCHES ADN WORDPLAYS AND FLOWZ

ANDDDDDDDDD EASIER TO READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: NewKid

new kid took dis hands dwn. he had sum nice personals n punches were nice. his flow was hot n tha vocab was pretty tight so.....

vote=newkid

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