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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
anything goes :shoot:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-29-04 at 02:54 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

bradley_thomas has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 02:55 PM.

hey man im new at this but ok

hey new kid u suck-- drop dead, thats ur luck//
ur like a brusied grape-- round not straight//
yeah ur weak and gay thats what i said-- best now if u drop dead//
ur parents hate u and so do i-- i hate u u fucking ur bi//
i need to institutionalize this compramise and see how u do-- u new name is mery lou//
the answer to a adition problom is sum-- and ur just as dumb//
i told u to stop suckin cock-- the times runnin out, tick toc//
so im gonna end this now-- go to hell and i take my bow//

NewKid has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 03:25 PM.

afta 19 post u still aint get a vitory..
come on dawg,i diminish u and ya carrier will b a mystery
seriously,i hurt u with mih "Punch"lines literally..

u onli 13,prolli aint get no hairs on ya "B" yet(balls)
rappin,think u next ta me..fuck ya girl with STD..
i leave u "Burnin" like ya pee test...

come on aqk..think u got a "Big" cock cus u used ta bien called cocky..
dawg i neva saw a rapper who likes playin hockey..
i leave u with tha chills n different time zones like a jacob watch b...

neva been on top no matta how mani dick yo rode..
sick with flows,naw ya shit juss cold..

~Punchline~
dumpin-tha-tecks,get hit in tha front-of-ya neck like pepl who dun-from-cigarettes..like "America" im "Wanted" by tha rest..pepl know who u are now,cus u bumped-it-with-tha best...

Up Up Uppin Fa Honest Votes,no Dickriders Eitha B Strait Up

hey new kid ur but not good enough// ill make u eat shit and stuff

hey vote for me dawgs
believe me i have the better log

Haha,this Clown Weak..uppin Fa Votes No D/r's Eitha


I Promise I Leave Thomas Or Bradley Hangin Out Tha Front Door Of Mah Caddy..

Use A "boy" I Get Mah"metal"to Hurt This "scout"..leave U Feeelin Fire Thas Wat Smokey Bear Made A Commercial Bout

Voted For: NewKid

punches/personals-new kid,bradlyes didnt make sense and some of newkids didnt either but newkids hit a lot harder in this battle

creativity-newkid, bradleys verse was just boring, newkids also but newkid just had more interesting and different things then bradleys, bradley had some good setups, but when he delivered the punch it was like wat?, you could have put better punches with your setups but you didnt

no hate on nobody peace good luck

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shit hey im new here give me a chance plz//new kids got nuttin but pees//vote for me and ill make it worth while//im emenin on the 8 mile

and hey new kid i do play hockey so shuv ei tu faggget

Voted For: NewKid

damn son, you defintley got this. Ya had the punches, a few good personals, nice metaphors. You were a little lacking in multiples, and the trasistions didnt go so smoothy. Other than that tight verse. Peace

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