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09-27-04, 01:49 PM
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why ??? need sum feedback
IP: BEF8 AF4D
sumtimez i cry , i dunno why
sumone tell me why all solja's gotta die fuck the goverment what they say is just a lie president of the usa , fuckin up the country erry day take a moment of silence and let us pray this goes out to all fallen youngsta's down irak not enuff experience to fight in the frontline attack all soljaz get ready to load your weapons didn't have the money to take college lessons parents gettin into deep depressions their kids got taken away , never gone see dem again livin in a world so dark lookin at nuthin but rain grip your hands together , let us burn sum candles if we stay together i am sure we can handle they were affraid to die on the battlefield our soljaz got used as a human shield you could see fear in their eyes they wont cry for one life ,they just wanted them to die NOW SUMONE TELL ME WHY IS THIS THE REASON WHY WE CRY
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09-27-04, 05:56 PM
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IP: BEF8 AF4D
uppin ......
drop sum feedback in here pz
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09-28-04, 02:03 PM
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IP: BEF8 AF4D
yo what wrong with y'all
need feedback in here
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09-29-04, 03:25 AM
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IP: 5285 DC82
deep . I liked this because it was obviously from your heart. Therefore you meant every word you wrote. Get a bit more tech with your rhyme's. But with the heart in this You will definitly stand out.
Keep droping man .........pz |
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09-29-04, 05:21 PM
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IP: BEF8 AF4D
ty bruh
it came straight from tha heart i lost sum1 from my fam in a war ........ uppin need feedback y'all
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09-29-04, 05:53 PM
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IP: 1E2A 16F7
yo much respect to u man that was deep it was from the heart
somebody in my life that was very important to me pass away in the war to we can over come these tough times just keep ur head up man |
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09-30-04, 04:07 PM
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IP: BEF8 AF4D
upping ...........
ty bruh yo need more feedback
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09-30-04, 06:58 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
best lines:
grip your hands together , let us burn sum candles if we stay together i am sure we can handle they were affraid to die on the battlefield our soljaz got used as a human shield ^you always seem to drop very touchin' poems, very very nice, i liked this one a lot.. u put forth emotion and effort in ur poems, which is very good, ur poems seem so down to earth.. keep up ur good work.. pz
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10-01-04, 08:14 PM
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IP: BEF8 AF4D
ty lady fiya
u drop sum ill shit 2 the game collab feat anxiety & L.I. ^^hot shit in there^^ upping ...... wake up ppl read & drop feedback __________________________________________________ _______________________ upping ...... wake up ppl read & drop feedback
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10-03-04, 09:29 PM
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IP: BEF8 AF4D
uppin ......
damn when y'all gone wake up
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10-07-04, 06:22 PM
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IP: BEF8 AF4D
yo upping for this stuff
comon y'all need sum feedback
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10-10-04, 08:08 PM
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IP: BEF8 AF4D
yo upping
comon y'all tell me what ya think & Xplane y you liked it if u do like it
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