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Old 09-29-04, 01:20 AM   #1
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Post TRUE STORY [ToughTimes]Part 1

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In the fast lane your life goes fast
It's time to take a journey into Tragedy's past
When I was one adopted by jerome Chapman
This was years before I started rappin
My father held a scholarship for a year
But then he died and so did his career
He left his son and soon to be wife
He died, and that was the end of his life
It's just not fair that he couldn't live through
But as I grew, I fell into the same trap, too
But I lived the life that he couldn't see
He died a 17 and that's the age of me
I escaped the cage where your nigga is your enemy
And cops turn misdemeanors into felonies
Playin the game the stakes are a lot
Either you're strung out on drugs, in jail or get shot
So I take the pain and put it in a song
Cause some of my niggas didn't last this long
Life to them just didn't seem important
As I watched their bodies get stiffer in the coffin
A young black target for someone to shoot at
life is like a war so i got stay ready for combat
I seek a life more promising than a waiter
The mass educator puttin pain on paper
Life is a battle and strength is survival
my mom told me when times got hard pick up the bible
Some search for better but most won't even try to
Cause every day a young dream is shatterin
Pressure is painful, the burden is batterin
It's time to take a journey into Tragedy's past
I'm a reborn rebel and my intellect leaks
The life I lived..... i can relates to the streets
Cause the past stays on my back to remind me
feeling afraid is what you gain when you find me
Heed the message I inject in your.........mind
I just a young fella trying to make it in these tough.... times

This is based on my life yo i been through some tough times but i have over come them and times are still hard for me but i never stop fighting cuz life is not easy but that does'nt mean u should give up.
word of advise we all can make it through the struggle...
i need sum feed back of this
one luv to my nigga above jazale shell

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Old 09-29-04, 03:47 AM   #2
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hell yea pimpin, that shit was strait as fuck n u kno what u talkin bout, when ever u hit the bottom the only way after that is up, good shit tho, peace
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man sinn u one crazy fuck but u come tight wit ur lines i like reading ur shit ur one of da few kats on dis shit dat keep it real
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Old 09-29-04, 03:55 AM   #3
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yo good looking out much respect
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Old 09-29-04, 03:03 PM   #4
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can ya'll give me some more feed back
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Old 09-29-04, 05:31 PM   #5
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people i need sum more feedback
let me kno if u like it or u dont like it
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Old 09-29-04, 05:34 PM   #6
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It was nice, I liked the way it flowed. If you do audio, I'd put this shit to a beat. Stay Up.
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Old 09-29-04, 05:44 PM   #7
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iight.......thankz man................
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Old 09-30-04, 12:58 AM   #8
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good looking

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It was nice, I liked the way it flowed. If you do audio, I'd put this shit to a beat. Stay Up.


yea man good looking....
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Old 10-04-04, 11:01 PM   #9
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i need some more feedback.........
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Old 10-05-04, 02:40 AM   #10
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that shit was deep and it came from the heart
yo jay keep ur head up man cuz u got skillz
niggaz need to realize that u could be the best
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Old 10-05-04, 03:53 AM   #11
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thankz man
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Old 10-08-04, 07:11 PM   #12
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can i get some more feedback on this ........
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Old 10-15-04, 06:45 PM   #13
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