Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



You know the deal, let's rock kid.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-29-04 at 09:14 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

SubtleTee has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 08:38 PM.

Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 08:40 PM.

Look kid ill shred your best script...
Have you lookin like the exorcist after I make your head twist...
You better sit, cuz you don't stand and chance in hell...
Like I chopped your legs off and Satan fell...
Iam tha kid that'll tear you apart from all angles...
This soldier is damned to be banned like tha star-spangled...
Your flows weak,but thats understandable since you a white guy...
My advice is you try to die in real life cuz you can't write rhymes...
Now thats some sick, disgustin' shit but fuckin' honest...
Your no contest like lazy crooks takin ACT's to get in college...


Aight manye drop ur verse now kid....

Fuck a “Wicked One,” I spit devilish lines with “Wicked Tongues”/
Kid I really only had to show and drop a verse to leave you outdone./

Son, I cause more “throwed backs” than the dude in your signature./
The whackest MC I’ve seen, so anti-ill that I’ll call this ~kid a cure~/

Leave with wins.You claim wickedness but I leave Satan appeased with sins/
My punches leave opponents heads spinnin faster than your “avvy’s rims.”/

BOOM! Man my sick lyrics “rock your box” you’re ~far from top.~/
You only “C(See) Rhymes” when I paste your eyes to “Hop On Pop”/

Step in my way and I’ll slash ~straight through,~ I’ll flat ~slay you~/
When you get on stage is the only time people are yelling “DJ WHO?”/



Explanations:

Line 3: Throwback=Jerseys. The guy in his sig's keeps changing.
Line 4: The opposite of ill. A cure. You cure illness.
Line 6: His avatar shows spinners
Line 7: Boombox. get it?
Line 8: His crew is Crhyme Syndicate
Line 10: His AIM is DJwhookid21

Voted For: SubtleTee

Subtle Tee
nice verse good flow disses punches
all dat could improve wordplay but
overall good verse


Wicked One
no real hard hittin punches u had one but
dats not enough 2 win u a battle verse
was koo dough keep spittin

vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

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Voted For: Wicked One

ok, I think wicked got this

Tee, your verse was ok, but punches didn't hit that hard. they were aiight though, not the reatest. Yo flow was ok. sdtayed good in beginni' but fell off in the end. But voerall, not bad, man, not bad.

Wicked, nice verse. You had some nice punmches in here. Some hit hard, and none hit weak. Nice shit. Yo flow was pretty good too. Nice shit, man. Props to you. Nice verse. pc

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Voted For: SubtleTee

Step in my way and I’ll slash ~straight through,~ I’ll flat ~slay you~/
When you get on stage is the only time people are yelling “DJ WHO?”/

That was enough to take this...other kid needs to really elevate smh...

Punches: sub
Personals SUb
Multis:sub
Metas:sub
Wordplay:sub...

.................................................. ....Bumpin this shit..................................

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Bump!

Vote You People!
Wtf Is Wrong With You?
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

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Voted For: SubtleTee

v/sub

quite tight battle here y'all both came with o.k verses...but i thought sub's verse won this for him quite easily, he had beta flow, wordplay and plenty of gud personals, punches were just o.k by both but sub took everything else...

peace

can ya hit up this battle wiv an honest vote...thanx..
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dont explain your verse.

This site is herbish.

Most people here need it.

Thanks for the feed anyway even if it was a little skimpy.

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