HEY EVRYBODY , I DINT GET TYM TO WRITE MUCH RAPS BECOZ I HAD SO MUCH WRK TO DO LOL , I DUNT FINK U'Z WANNA KNOW DAT ANYWAY LMAO!!

ANYWAY DIS IS JUST A QUICK DROP, PLZ DNT GIV ME REPLYZ LYK O DIS IS SHIT MINES IS BETTA OK DATS JUS WAK , IT WUD BE MOR HELPFUL IF U EXPLAIN WAT IZ WRONG AN HOW TO IMPROVE

P.S DIS IS JUS A QUIK WRITE UP - U CAN TELL N E WAY LOL !



LADY T - STAND TALL - QUIK TIN


Sometimes it feels like your all alone
Nobody to care and your on your own
Struggling to support while burderns you hold
Juggling what was taught as you grow old
Hope-in for a finer day to come your way
Hopen for success and not lead astray
Reviving the peace from times of stress
Speak from the mind as I address
Stand up tall - knock back the wall
Don’t let the evil catch your fall
U been climbin up for years and now your lookin down
Memory’s of square 1 as you climbed frm the ground



[B]ANYONE WILL DO

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LaDy_T_aKa_LaDy_LyRiCaL

" eVeRy LoSs Is A sTePpIn StOnE tO sUcEsS ! "

This is good for a quick peice. You had a allright flow to it. Good concept. But your rhyme's are a bit simple. try get more tech with them.On your next peice try taking more time and putting more effort into it. So your full potential is showing. But yeah this isnt to bad for a quick drop...........pz

Tnx Fo The Comment - Most Apriciate It............ok Peace Am Out

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LaDy_T_aKa_LaDy_LyRiCaL

" eVeRy LoSs Is A sTePpIn StOnE tO sUcEsS ! "