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10-06-04, 09:26 PM | #1 | |||||
A Reflection Of The Past
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critic vs subletee
IP: 88C4 C811
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Check Ins Must Be In By Friday Or Your Topic Wont Be Given... If Check Ins Are In Then You Will Be Given A topic To Write About... Poems Then Must Be In By Sunday And Voting Will Be Over On Tuesday... 15 to 30 lines no crew votes no hate votes no d/r votes TOPIC: hand full of tears DUE:12:00 am western time goodluck
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10-07-04, 07:43 AM | #2 | |||||
Black Poet
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IP: 2041 AFC0
Check this,,...
Thanks Valor 1~ |
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10-07-04, 04:37 PM | #3 | ||||
Flyweight
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IP: CEDE 005F
IP: 2041 AFC0
Check this,,... Thanks Valor 1~
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Battles:
Laid To Rest: Wicked One, Vango, Critic, X-on, genocide (biter),40cal,
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10-11-04, 12:58 AM | #4 | ||||
Flyweight
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IP: CEDE 005F
Standing in the shadows of swaying weeping willows.
Black garb sucking the warmth from my broken body. I cannot face the grayed stone that marks your rest. Or the groups of loved ones huddling together. What do they know of love? Pure sweet love? Instead I tremble with my face buried in fists. Unwilling to show my weakness in times of trial. Raising my face to the sky, leaving a burned image. Of a shimmering pool of tears left in cupped hands. This mass of silver is the lining in my cloud, truth. Stumbling incoherently over to your stretch of turf. Feeling your essence rising through the dirt to me. I embrace you and let the glittering tears fall. Watering the dirt where your still body lies. So you can grow, grow to life and return to me. Forever………
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Battles:
Laid To Rest: Wicked One, Vango, Critic, X-on, genocide (biter),40cal,
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10-11-04, 03:02 AM | #5 | |||||
A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
suble tee
wins due to no show
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