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Old 10-11-04, 03:07 AM   #31
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but buddy, my verse was better, if your brain cantcome up wit new lines, how can it undertand the wordplay




OMG OWNED!!! now stop this beef its gettin wack
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Old 10-11-04, 03:09 AM   #32
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^ no, it wasn't. first of all, your rhyme scheme is terrible. "whored" and "bored" end rhymes? seriously. pitiful.

secondly, you structure is stretch as hell.

most importantly, you don't understand because you've never had a good line. "im the pimp because you're getting whored"? that's not wordplay. a 7 year old could think of that.

nobody in their right mind besides some halfway retarded 3 year old would think your verse is better than mine. period.
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Old 10-11-04, 03:11 AM   #33
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mmmmm right anywho d-d-d-damn!!!
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Old 10-11-04, 03:12 AM   #34
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mmmm. please commit net suicide.
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Old 10-11-04, 03:13 AM   #35
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This Philosopher kid is starting to piss me off.

Hes not funny.
And hes still trying to be.

...I agree with the post above this one.
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Old 10-11-04, 03:13 AM   #36
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wack and back.... yes your ryhme sceme is so much better then mine, just stfu
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Old 10-11-04, 03:14 AM   #37
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Poet dont be harsh man, fo real were old fam
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Old 10-11-04, 03:15 AM   #38
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gunit101 > philosopher

Lets leave it at that.
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Old 10-11-04, 03:18 AM   #39
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Quote:
Originally Posted by herb
wack and back.... yes your ryhme sceme is so much better then mine, just stfu


Quote:
Originally Posted by my verse, highlighted for the slightly slower amongst us
cuz ya ancient tracks is only deemed interesting by paleontologists
ya words hollow bitch, more of the same wack
shit's why nobody's cheering when *this* 23 came back


Again. Just die.
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Old 10-11-04, 03:20 AM   #40
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^lol at this kid, are you not seeing the point of this thread?
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Old 10-11-04, 03:22 AM   #41
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This thread is pointless, the point now is to make philosopher understand that he has no talent.
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Old 10-11-04, 03:24 AM   #42
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umm yeah exactly.. i guess.
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Old 10-11-04, 03:31 AM   #43
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nice thread troop

but you foorgot one thing

don't vote for people just because
you think there online and will return the favor

it gets so annoying

"*****had better flow and ome SICK punchlines
and the personals was tight and structure was ILL"


^and it was a topical battle...

jus annoying

I'm still anewb also
though I don't spit like one
nor act line one

pc
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Old 10-11-04, 03:33 AM   #44
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^lol.. nice ego you added in there.
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Old 10-11-04, 03:35 AM   #45
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lol

yep that's how gangsta I am

I type 60 words a minute

and I have proper punctuation and grammer
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that's gangster related
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