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Old 07-18-02, 03:14 PM   #16
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and im sorry acutally im not this was a pleasure readin this. stay up
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Old 07-18-02, 03:22 PM   #17
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Very little to say except that this was excellent. There was great flow to it, excellent imagery, and just an all around great piece. Good storytelling and everything. Probably the best thing I've read here.

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Old 07-18-02, 07:29 PM   #18
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Damn, thanks
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Old 07-18-02, 08:14 PM   #19
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LOL..I Wasn't Sleeping..

Im Just Lazy..

Well Dayum, What A Vivid Story..

Flow Was Immaculate Through Tha Whole Piece..

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Shes ten years old, and ten years cold, so much that her breath's seen in the air..//
a routine scare from neglecting parents, so when she screams theres no one there..//
Cuz no one cares..and no one dares to calm her shivers when she shakes..//
quivers and quakes..after hearing each day of her life was all mistakes..//


Daaaayum..

Word About Tha Similes And Metaphors Used..Dope Dope..

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but he was always shady, never treated her like a lady..//
his liquor came first, even when placed in the lineup of her and their baby..//
She's sorry he got her pregnant, on that night of drunken passion..//
she's sorry the chips of her fertility were to much for him to cash-in..//


Daaayum Again..

Loads More Quotables, But I Don't Wanna Take Up A Whole Page Quoting..

Pure Brilliance For What It Was..

Keep It Coming Like Always..

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Old 07-18-02, 08:22 PM   #20
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^thats what IM talkin about...
thanks a lot, rook..
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Old 07-22-02, 02:04 PM   #21
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Im not ready for pg 3 yet..
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Old 07-22-02, 02:07 PM   #22
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too damn bad imma give u a pg.3 LOL!! j/p yo ma errythang was on point. good shyt. keep postin da realness. and hit me up too i want some luv too!!!! uno
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