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Old 10-11-04, 12:24 PM   #1
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War And Terrorism

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War and Terrorism

Verse 1

What is this world cumin to I look around all I “see is pain"
Deep down what do these terrorists “have to gain”
Bin laden. Sadamm the IRA “too many to name”
They claim to be different but there “all the same”
Bring devastation to the earth they’d kill a “baby at birth”
With them in the world I start to think what is “my life worth”
They say “peace in the middle east” but this is “what we want least”
Running to church begging to god for mercy “through the priest”
We want “the whole world to get along” “no-ones right no-ones wrong”
We got bush and Blair after the invisible weapons “we can’t last to long”
A bomb guna drop on the UK plain or taxi “which will explode”
It’ll hit damn hard palace or big Ben “which will implode”

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War and terrorism “will it ever stop?”
How many more men “will it take to drop?”
How many more kids have to “lose there lives?”
How many more husbands have to “lose there wife’s?”

War and terrorism “will it ever stop?”
How many more men “will it take to drop?”
How many more kids have to “lose there lives?”
How many more husbands have to “lose there wife’s?”

Verse 2

Terrorism is the last step to peace “will we ever beat it”
Suicide bombers, plane hijacks “will we ever defeat it”
Wars going on in Iraq “will the British soldiers ever retreat it”
The answer “is no-way” cos terrorism “is here to stay”
“Innocent are people dyeing”, “babies are crying”
“The Government’s lying” “All terrorists are denying”
That is war in four simple statements “in my view”
The only people I can trust now r the one’s “in my crew”
“9/11 is a date to remember” “the day of hell in mid September”
Remembering the dead when they should be “celebrating in December”
War and terrorism “is there anything we can do” “that’s wot im asking you”
Because if you ask me Ill say “I aint got a clue”

Chorus

Verse 3
Saddamm’s been caught but that’s not the “end if the fight”
You got his followers that will still “send there might”
Strap the bomb to there chest and “let it blow”
Radioactive bombs hitting the world “soon well all glow”
Explosions move to “Istanbul” if I “recall” there were 100’s of men “to fall”
American and England vs. Iraq 2 on 1 and still “people die”
Family’s kids have been blown away all I can hear is “as they cry”
Fighting for there lives “no weapons to protect” ”get stepped on like an insect”
Why are innocent people dyeing “wasn’t the mission to serve and protect”
As I bring this to a close people are still “being killed”
There is no end to terrorism and war “blood will always be spilled”

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Old 10-11-04, 12:39 PM   #2
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Old 10-11-04, 02:54 PM   #3
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Old 10-11-04, 05:38 PM   #4
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i feel that there is too much of the war shit we need to get on a different topic but ir was actully so turth full word and very well put toget i like the flow too i give it a 8.5/10
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Old 10-11-04, 06:26 PM   #5
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Old 10-12-04, 05:50 PM   #6
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Nice verse man I was feelin it, I was going to do something
on this subject but I haven't got round to writing. But that
was a hott verse man stay up.

Hott shit uppin for my boi.

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Old 10-12-04, 09:35 PM   #7
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nice

nice emotion imagery......

flowed good....you always put shit together proper

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Old 10-12-04, 10:28 PM   #8
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it was aint aight drop
i give it bout a 7/10
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Old 10-13-04, 10:56 AM   #9
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Aight Thanks For The Feed

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Old 10-13-04, 10:58 AM   #10
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Nice shit man, Loved this piece, hey if u have a min feed on my "Only god knows"

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Old 10-13-04, 02:09 PM   #11
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nice piece...id have to agree there is too much stuff on the war..but imma have to admit dat dis was da best piece ive read about it so far..GOOD ONE
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Old 10-13-04, 02:55 PM   #12
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good drop ill give it an 8.5/10 nice very nice
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