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10-13-04, 08:30 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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FastFoward.......Rewind.....
IP: 66F2 AB19
Story Pay Attention Very Closely... ....FastFoward...... Hopped In The Car The Story Began... We Walked Foward Again..From The Start To The End... Uncle Gave me A Five...Told Me To Do My Thing... Me And The Opponent Touched Mics After We Went On Stage.... He Said His Verse Shortly After The Beat Was Played... His Act...Was Like "You To Young To Rap".... So i Started Up After He Was Done With His Rap.... I Said "His Verse MAkes Vinilla Ice Look Like A Genuis Wiz"... "Because Spit eveyword kicked...Was My Biggest Diss".... I Kept Spitting Finishing My Words Off Top... Said Another 2 Bars After The Beat Had Stopped... I Hear "Go Baker" From The Crowd.... Walked Off The Stage With Style.... Uncle came Laughing Saying Thats How You Use Creat-ivity... Another Dude In My Face Like You "Killed that Emcee".. Walked Out..Les Unlocked The Car Doors We Got In... Les Took The Cd BAck Out And Put It Back In.. Dropped Me off At the Crib Gave Him Dap and Got Out... Went Up to My Room When I Got In The House... Took Off My Clothes and The Yankee Fitted... Laid On The Bed And The Stories Finished... .................Reeeeeeewwwwiiiinnnnnnddd........ .. I Jumped Out Of The Bed... Hat Came Back On My Head... Clothes Attached Covering... Went Back Out the Door Like A rewind Button... Uncle Came Back in Reverse I hoped back in the Ride... Gave Him A Five....We Went The Other way out The Side... He Took A Cd Out The Stero..Put It In the Glove Box... We Stopped got Out Instantly the Doors Locked... We Walked Backwards Back faced Straight in The Building... Person in my face "That Emcee You Killed Him" We Went To Another Section.... He Gave Me A Five Laughing And went To Another Direction.. I Stepped back On The Stage in Front Of A Audience... Crowd cheering "Baker Go" Hollering"..... I Picked The Mic Back Up And Looked At My Opponent... The Ending Of the Beat Came Back On I Spit Words Unwroted.. (Pay Attention To the Words..To Under Stand The Verse) "Wiz Genuis A Look Ice Vinilla Make Verse His..." "Diss Biggest My Was...Kicked Everyword Spit..." It Goes backwards And On and On And On i go... I Stopped Looked Aorund His Turn To Flow... He Said Suttin Like "Rap to Young To He... He Said A Few More Words Then They Stoped the Beat.... We Touched Mics Then We walked Off Stage... Uncles Gave Me Dap Told Me To Do My Thing... We Back first Out Again.... Hopped In the Car the Story Begin.... The End...
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10-13-04, 08:36 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: 66F2 AB19
Upping With Feed Back....
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10-14-04, 02:44 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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this was great, i'm surprised no ones left feed yet,,good flow to this and vocab, good content, i like the story, and the break in the middle,,the rewind part, this would sound good being spit on the mic too.....this was dope man...1
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10-14-04, 06:58 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: 66F2 AB19
Thanx Up......
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10-14-04, 07:30 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: 66F2 AB19
Upp For Feedback.
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10-14-04, 07:57 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: 66F2 AB19
Upp For Feedback.
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10-14-04, 08:47 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: 66F2 AB19
Stop Sleeping And Uppp
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10-14-04, 08:53 PM
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23-7, 16 Knockouts
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IP: 3240 794D
dis was ok, u need to elevate i would expect more from a 20 and above winner
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10-14-04, 09:04 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: 66F2 AB19
^^^^ Im Not All For The Big Vocab Words Im For What Ppl Wanna Hear Im Just Posting What Imma Spit..SoorrY If You Dont Like It Bro.
Upping
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10-14-04, 09:44 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: 66F2 AB19
Upp...............
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10-14-04, 09:47 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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Gangsta....
nice shit.. this would be dope if in audio....
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10-14-04, 09:53 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: 66F2 AB19
Yeahh.....But Blahhhh........Uppin ^^ Thanx.....
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10-15-04, 04:08 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: 7C6F 690C
uppping for feedback.
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10-15-04, 05:22 PM
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IP: 258C A279
shit was nice mayn...
..keep doin ya thing make money where ya going... wit No Limit Records... ...Peace
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10-15-04, 05:23 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: 1B5C 2AE3
Chiaa....Thanx...Upp....
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