ayo i'm strait flowing and killing this board/
leave all you bitches scared and houred/
you all claim your ill and that optional/
but your more fruity than tucan sam in the tropical/
i'm gonna hit you wit the obtical/
illusion/
your ego i'm brusing/
you think your winning but your losing/
who's in/
first place/
Synickle putting you in ya damn place/
this bomb i'm dropping is laced/
to leave ya whole excistance erased/
cause i'm out for blood/
shove da gun in da mouth of a thug/
so ya better say graces/
while i make faces and brake you in eight places/
batteling me you better take paces/
who's quick?/
when i put you to sleep for life when i made my trigg click/
light you up like a whik/
cause now i'm on fire/
Synickle tha king but you can call me sire/
got your hoe on my oscer meyer/
the new MC for hire/
polish my crown/
leave you safe and sound/
six feet under ground/
stop me now/
look bitches done copped my style/
your ill/
i got the medicine/
cause your all gonna taste DA-FEAT like a bitch with foot fetishes!!!!!!!!!!

damn dawg... seriously... if you had a scheme for your rhymes... you'd be ill-er, no doubt you got rhymes... its just now lay-out for a reader to follow, if you wanna pause in a rhyme, use the (...) or the comma... peace


signed,
~madd

I AGREE WITH MADD YOU HAVE ALL THE POTENTIAL

garbage... blah blah blah...

ni66a dun hate on me bcuz i got a talent.!!!!!!!!! let see u spit dunny.!! holla bacc

Them rhymes are aiight

Keep at it
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