RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Fresh From The Lab > Textual Releases
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 10-16-04, 11:29 AM   #1
B.I.Detained
Mona Lisa.
 
B.I.Detained's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,334
Joined: Dec 2003
Status: Offline
Picture Diss: 1st Victim = Carsonjetx2000. Ghey

IP: 828D 0B7A

http://community.rapverse.com/attac...ntid=9790&stc=1

Sorry you had to be the 1st but...

Your heads ugly son.. but I guess you've known that for years
& yea this bitch is fly.. but its hard not to with those ears.
Picture disses are fun for all.. if ya don't like it fag then sue me
Carsons had his 5 minutes of fame.. as Sloth from the Goonies.
You have that look about you.. that just screams "I can't"..
when your adams apple.. has a bigger bulge than your pants.
Its true back in the day.. Carson battled me and got the win
But don't mistake that for a mole.. I took a dump on his chin.
Straight up mauling this fag.. this bitch just looks a wreck.
Cx2 already in the x-mas spirit..w/ that piece of tinsel around his neck
Suspended sentence for being ugly.. so Ima cash it in now
Just watch me pluck away.. like Carson does to his eyebrows.
He's on a downward spiral.. I'm jus re-assuring his demise
Carson is the ONE & ONLY.. to own a hat that comes in Super Size.
Big headed fuck.. your head in itself deserves a prize
& yea this picture diss is fucking bent.. as your eyes.
Can't look straight.. so now how do you expect to play?
You have the eyes for football.. the way they go Home & Away.
I'll stop this now.. I'll quit dissing the close up & the frown..
See I got 20 lines on your head.. & a million from the neck-down.



Yup..
Goodnight..
I expect one bk.

-1
__________________
"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"
Send a message via AIM to B.I.Detained   Reply With Quote
Old 10-16-04, 02:11 PM   #2
B.I.Detained
Mona Lisa.
 
B.I.Detained's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,334
Joined: Dec 2003
Status: Offline
IP: 828D 0B7A

Uppin....




......


......
__________________
"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"
Send a message via AIM to B.I.Detained   Reply With Quote
Old 10-16-04, 03:20 PM   #3
Dirty Nigga
E-Style, Bitch.
 
Posts: 6,728
Joined: Aug 2004
Status: Offline
Text Record: 33-18
IP: E617 68E9

lol nice diss
ya shouldda hollerd, i wouldda been more thasn happy to diss that homo
but decent drop
nice wordplay n personals
8/10
__________________

People Hate What They Can't Conquer
Send a message via MSN to Dirty Nigga   Reply With Quote
Old 10-17-04, 05:44 AM   #4
B.I.Detained
Mona Lisa.
 
B.I.Detained's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,334
Joined: Dec 2003
Status: Offline
IP: 828D 0B7A

Thanks..

-1
.
__________________
"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"
Send a message via AIM to B.I.Detained   Reply With Quote
Old 10-17-04, 07:01 AM   #5
Introspect.
Banned: Cheating
 
Introspect.'s Avatar
 
Joined: Jun 2004
From: Boston
Status: Offline
Text Record: 19-3
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 5510 817C

weerd nice drop...go leave sum feed on my comeback ..........its called -Damn he's back- .....
Send a message via AIM to Introspect.   Reply With Quote
Old 10-17-04, 03:26 PM   #6
B.I.Detained
Mona Lisa.
 
B.I.Detained's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,334
Joined: Dec 2003
Status: Offline
IP: 828D 0B7A

Not enough feedbk to return the favour mate.

-1
__________________
"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"
Send a message via AIM to B.I.Detained   Reply With Quote
Old 10-17-04, 03:31 PM   #7
Abraxas
Bonecrushing Nigga
 
Posts: 5,838
Joined: Jul 2004
From: 305
Status: Offline
Text Record: 14-3
IP: 98C0 39B0

This was dope.. it was mostly funny.. but noty really can be used for a battle......
very nice structre and flow.. you are really good at that... it was flowing all well... some lines i though was jusst not as good..but it was still dope...i ddint like line 12... nice though.......

Please feedback on my open mic... Questioning my Existence....
__________________
Guess who?...



...Paramik Fuckin'...


...Owns You!


||RVS Text Champion||
Send a message via AIM to Abraxas   Reply With Quote
Old 10-17-04, 03:36 PM   #8
mistah_tate
Middle Weight
 
Posts: 407
Joined: Jul 2004
From: da ville, AL
Status: Offline
Text Record: 8-3
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 93AF 0EB2

this was damned funny in all, nice diss.

Picture disses are fun for all.. if ya don't like it fag then sue me
Carsons had his 5 minutes of fame.. as Sloth from the Goonies.

That line right there had me gone man, and why you call him your 1st victim, is there more of this shit to come? i hope so cuz this was pure comedy cuzz, you got my props
__________________
"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

Send a message via AIM to mistah_tate   Reply With Quote
Old 10-17-04, 06:41 PM   #9
Key...
You Love My Style.
 
Key...'s Avatar
 
Posts: 4,598
Joined: Aug 2003
Status: Offline
Text Record: 19-2
Audio Record: 11-2
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 5572 2B68

Hahaha shit is crazy man....lol Made me laugh

hahaha................................... ....................... ...........................................
__________________


Quote:
Originally Posted by Mother Theresa
"Hi Key, You The Only Guy Who Took My Virginity."


Authentik Intelligence
O. Y. D.




  Reply With Quote
Old 10-18-04, 12:23 PM   #10
B.I.Detained
Mona Lisa.
 
B.I.Detained's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,334
Joined: Dec 2003
Status: Offline
IP: 828D 0B7A

Yup there will be more.

Soon.

-1.
__________________
"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"
Send a message via AIM to B.I.Detained   Reply With Quote
Old 10-18-04, 07:59 PM   #11
Chew187
Flyweight
 
Chew187's Avatar
 
Posts: 115
Joined: Oct 2004
From: Canada "king of countries"
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-0
Audio Record: 0-1
Graphics Record: 0-0
Shit

IP: 5043 32F4

Shit bro yo flow was too weak wanna glimse of talent simply take a peek
into my profile a true pimp with style
betta file your nails cuz like your rhymes smell like bile, they're too stale
you try 2 hard that's why you fail
everytime you try don't lie you little fag
wet at the ears; tail between your legs
maybe read a book that way you'll learn sumthing
I'm sick of all you punks always saying nothing
you ain't worth a ham sandwich with balogny
I smoke blunts with yayo while your momma blows me
how bout some more mayo ya fat phony
your so poor; can't afford macaroni
I'm like Tony Montana take off your bandana
you ain't a thug biiotch drop the cabana
i play hermonica, you just blow dicks
you wanna spit like me but you can only wish
check out yo momma sh'e really quite the dish
I spoon the double kit-kat into the belly of the bitch PEACE
Cya at the rap olympics!!! we're gonna twist shit up check it
  Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 06:34 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.