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07-20-02, 12:32 PM | #1 | ||||||
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" The Blue Prints Of A Blacc Woman"
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One part love
to prove she has heart One part brains to prove she has smarts One part emotion which uncovers her feelings Two parts ambition so as to further her dealings One part confidence the way she walks the walk One part vocabulary so she knows how to talk One part headstrong disrespect a sister? Now you know that's dead wrong One part Jealousy so you know she's with you Two parts mushy so you can call her "Boo" One part culture to prove she has clout maintaining peace of mind that's what she's about One part black nationalism so she's down for her own Two parts age and wisdom so you know she's full grown One part pride so she represents well another part deception so at times you can't tell is she lying or is she truthful? to me, she is so beautiful fruitful One part prenuptial so your car is recoopable One part advice so you need not ask twice One part tender care so you know she's nice Three parts intelligence so you know she's not a fool One part attractiveness to make the white boys drool One part envy so the caucasians take note I'm no racist but it's not for the "valley girls" that I wrote One part ghetto so she knows the streets One part lyrics so she doesn't just listen for beats One part innovation so she always keeps you guessing One part hardhead so she always keeps you stressing Four parts respect so you know she knows her place One part beauty written all over her face Two pars devotion so you know she's down for you One part stubborn doing only what she wants to do Ten parts clever fool a sister? Never One part longevity so any storm she can weather One part family so introduce her to moms One part pugnacious so she's quick with the palms One part attitude so she bends over for nathan One part real so you know she's not faking throw in some sex appeal plus a little bit of freak maintain eye contact whenever you speak One part resistance then add a little persistence if something goes down she'll be there in an instant those are the blueprints of a Black Woman the traces of her soul One part spirit then you accomplish your goal. |
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07-20-02, 10:26 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: ADEC 56AC
Yo dun hate on dis piece its positive u brothers might learn somethang.
Uppin!!!!!!!! |
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07-21-02, 12:45 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: E76E A439
One part pugnacious
so she's quick with the palms ^^ lovin that line, I loved the concept of this it was wonderfully put together & flowed real nicely off tha tounge. The only thing that i didn't like was the whole "Blacc" woman thing, it coulda been real woman instead because I have to admit that's what deterred me from reading it the first time I noticed it, the blueprints title was pure genious though, props for that. I'd like to think that I may have some parts of whatever woman inspired this peice (whether she be dream or real) but I know that I'm not all it is actually a peice that I would aspire to in a daily sence, I think that this was an overall wonderful peice & I will definatly read all yo work in the future because you have very well defined skillz! peace boo |
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07-23-02, 12:24 AM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 798B E607
i feeling that a lot uppin
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07-23-02, 10:27 AM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: F8DE F595
was a well put piece for real...i feel ya in my own context...liked it a lot (even though it was at times one dimensional - black woman -, but still, i feel ya)....
....respect... |
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07-26-02, 07:18 AM | #6 | ||||||
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One part attractiveness
to make the white boys drool One part envy so the caucasians take note I'm no racist but it's not for the "valley girls" that I wrote ^ HMmMmMmMmM ... Diggin dis piece ... U showed up ur skills nicely .. Props ~1~ |
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