hot shit goes past my ways,and
bad shit flows on like spinnin waves,
yeah ya probaly thinking dis boy got any lyrical game
and guess wat i du,
da reason ya gurl comes to me is to get her singing career up like ERICA BADU,
come on ya know Nytch is takin over,
leave ya raps colder than food in da frige like left overs.

this was basic..........i guess ur new so u did good for ur first time...just keep writin and elevatin and u ll improve ....but u gotta put work into it and stay active....g'luck

good way to learn is to read vets' pieces....."legend is born" prolly the best piece u ll ever read!!