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Old 10-17-04, 10:15 PM   #1
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We Are The Future

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We Are The Future
By: L.I.

The elders of America are perishing and losing their knowledge...
What's worse is that the youth decrease their enrollment in college...
Everyday we turn on the news.. viewing the Iraq death tolls...
Not realizing actuality.. our minds are flooded with reality shows...
In ways we are helpless.. so we follow along with the culture glove...
& if we get a sense of knowledge.. we're hated for speaking up...
Censorship makes us believe its a happy world.. yet instead...
It's passed when kids gather to watch a guy get beheaded...
Teens getting killed off rapidly.. idiotic newscasters proclaim...
Solution: throw the blame of violence on a fucking video game...
Academic skills crashing because of popularity and looks?!...
Funny how a kid will fuck his hand before ever hitting the books...
Schools a safe place to reside and study without getting harrassed...
Yet we gotta walk through six metal detectors before ever going to class...
We love America.. the freedom of speech, liberty to the unjust...
But when guns bust, we ask.. America why dont you love us?...
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Old 10-17-04, 10:27 PM   #2
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damn nice job man that was a deep spit...I liked how you spoke of violence and blaming video games for it, the metal detector shit, everything was hot. much ups to you.
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Old 10-17-04, 10:37 PM   #3
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Thanks for the love...more feedback please
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Old 10-17-04, 10:38 PM   #4
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good shyt L.I. ... lots of valid points, especially that metal detector shyt and that hittin the books line was off the meter... closer makes ya think about all the shyt ya said in the beginning...

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Old 10-17-04, 10:49 PM   #5
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^ Word...thanks for the love fam....
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Old 10-17-04, 10:50 PM   #6
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flow was nice, content was agreeable, most it it, cause i would'nt say the youth that go to college is decreasing, due to all the hype about college its actually increasing, rating this a 3.9/5 keep dropping peace!
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Old 10-18-04, 06:29 AM   #7
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Thanks..upping .
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Old 10-18-04, 06:32 AM   #8
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weerd was feelin this...go drop LI now go leave feed on damn hes back....
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Old 10-18-04, 03:53 PM   #9
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good job LI.. i was feeling this.. it was dope... keep it up...
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Old 10-18-04, 03:59 PM   #10
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Word up...OM of October worthy?
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Old 10-18-04, 07:01 PM   #11
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hell nah now you gettin carried away i got that shit.....
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Old 10-18-04, 07:03 PM   #12
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Good good.. this was dope... not best open mic of october.. yet.....definatly good.....
nice flow and rhymes shecme

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Old 10-18-04, 11:43 PM   #13
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i felt it was lacking in the middle...but than towards the end...it started gettin real dope...and the last two or 3 bars killed it...i'll gfive you a 8.5/10...keep in mind thats with counting the first half, which i wasn't really feeling...but anyways...dope piece...real dope piece
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We Are The Future
By: L.I.

The elders of America are perishing and losing their knowledge...
What's worse is that the youth decrease their enrollment in college...
Everyday we turn on the news.. viewing the Iraq death tolls...
Not realizing actuality.. our minds are flooded with reality shows...
In ways we are helpless.. so we follow along with the culture glove...
& if we get a sense of knowledge.. we're hated for speaking up...
Censorship makes us believe its a happy world.. yet instead...
It's passed when kids gather to watch a guy get beheaded...
Teens getting killed off rapidly.. idiotic newscasters proclaim...
Solution: throw the blame of violence on a fucking video game...
Academic skills crashing because of popularity and looks?!...
Funny how a kid will fuck his hand before ever hitting the books...
Schools a safe place to reside and study without getting harrassed...
Yet we gotta walk through six metal detectors before ever going to class...
We love America.. the freedom of speech, liberty to the unjust...
But when guns bust, we ask.. America why dont you love us?...


Some good fucking shit...
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Teens getting killed off rapidly.. idiotic newscasters proclaim...
Solution: throw the blame of violence on a fucking video game...

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Old 10-19-04, 02:03 AM   #15
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THat was deadly man you dealt with real shit and you didnt lose track once
And it flowed togethr almost perfectly that was the best one i seen today. Can you audio dude you have to check it PEACE
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