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Old 10-20-04, 12:37 AM   #1
helter skelter
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fuckin bars of fire

IP: FDD6 AE15

like g-unit im pop them thang/
im the reason why in da hood it gose bang bang/
in this batlle youll need a teflon rapped around your chest/
my puchline leave u a fucking bloody mess/
mac ten's mac 11's time for some clappnn/
win this batlle so fast you ant even no what hapnn/
loc to the dog my name stands for trouble/
nigga you betta loc and load on the double/
back down befor u wind up on the back of a milk carton/
put 12 shelll in you as if u were a egg carton/
fuk around and i have u hooked up to an i.v./
that is what u get for tryin to try me/
to go against me it takes guts/
you need a heart of a lion and king kongs nuts/
my favorite buddy is gun/
bet he'll have u lookin like spaggetti when hes done/
youd betta not step on my air ones /
if u do its redrum ready here it comes/
run that mouth till i bust the chrome/
youll be crying like a bitch when the hollow tips crush ur bone/
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Old 10-20-04, 12:18 PM   #2
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Ooooooooooooooooooooookkkk

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Ur Style Is Real Basic And Simple Which Helps As Far As Being Able To Play More With Words Than A Tongue Twista Rapper But At The Same Time The Content Is Lame And You Don't Paint A Very Good Picture Of What Ur Saying.over All I Think Your A Good Battle Rapper But The Buck Stops There.
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